Ahh this story is awesome!! Even better than the first one! At first I hated how Peter was so depressed and moody, but I loved him at the end when he was swearing to protect his family and fight of Valin. Oh and Edmund! He was so brave, telling Peter to kill him for Narnia and standing up to be the leader when Peter didn't find himself worthy. And Susan always knowing what to say and never backing down or giving up. And little Lucy doing all she could and making friends along the way that Edmund would never dream of making but who in the end saved their lives!! It was just so cool!! lol I have noticed something though. In both this story and The Sea and the Siblings, Susan is primarily the damsel in distress who is wounded or captured and needs to be rescued. Not so much in the first one, but definitely in this one - we didn't even get to see her until the end! Did you plan that for Susan, or does it just happen? lol Well either way your stories are excellent and I truly enjoy them. I do hope that you continue to write more because I just love how you picture the Pevensies in Narnia and I love reading about it! :D

This has been a truly amazing story, one which I have enjoyed immensely! I certainly hope you have plans for some more Pevensie adventures; I will be eagerly awaiting them!

Bravo!

Wonderful chapter with a sense of closure. Even I sighed with a sense of home as Lucy went up stairs to her own room. LOL I'm excited about the epilogue and I hope you'll present it soon.

Rolletti

Aw, I was looking forward to Peter eating leather. But this was a nice little chappie even without the boot eating. Anyway is this the end of it? It would be a good ending but if there's more I don't mind reading it.

very nice. it had some amount of finitude to it, so i would keep it to an epilogue after this. it was a calm chapter. you brought across a sense of peace to it that worked well. good work.

Hi! Wow, nice homecoming chapter. It must feel good to be back home in Narnia. Expecially for the Old Narnians. I've really enjoyed this story and I can't wait to see how it ends in your epilogue. By the way, you are a great writer. I love your style. ^_^ Well, cya! ^_^

I'm so glad Peter didn't have to nosh on his footwear. This was a lovely homecoming!

Fantastic story! I love the whole thing!

I hope your Choir Tour went well?

Es

xx

A truly imaginative story! You developed an entirely new world, yet did so in a way that fits in with the "canon" settings, and this is a great and exciting story. I've actually read through all your Narnia fics recently, and I really like your writing, especially the descriptiveness and detail. So, I'm hoping for more to come!

Okay, so because this story is so completely amazing that I couldn't put into words just how much I love it, I thought I'd show you instead. You have inspired the fanartist in me. If you go to my profile on these is a link to my diviantart account, in my gallery there is a picture called Royal Behavior: Debate, and your amazing writing inspired it so I thought it would only be fair if I shared it with you. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Oh...that was a surprise to find that Timothy and the others from his world are Narnians. A nice twist Capegio and a well writteb story. You're wrapping it up very nicely.

Hi! Aw, this is such a nice chapter. A fun coronation and a tearful goodbye. Vareth is going make a great King. ^_^ Edmund sure has some of the best lines. "Hope your boots taste good, Peter" was just so funny. But for Peter's sake, I hope the Promise Potion wore off and he doesn't have to eat his boots. It'll probably make him sick! Well, it looks like they are finally returning to Narnia. Homeward Bound! ^_^ Anyway, please continue again real soon. I'm looking forward to seeing how this closes off. Cya then! ^_^

Oh dear, dear Ed always gets the best lines. I loved this tearful goodbye chapter and I loved it even more with Ed's brand of humour in the end. Poor Peter will be eating boots.

'"Sunshine, rainbows and butterflies!" Edmund said angrily...'

Classic!

awesome chapter!! :D