Supposed to have been posted 8 October 2011, at and the Coruscant Entertainment Center in my The Critic's Two Cents. but I had problems with my computer, and flaked on attaching these reviews to the original story threads for the last year. Everyone say; 'Mach is a flake, Mach is a yo-yo'. Better yet (Waves hand) 'Mach is trying, but he's still a flake'.

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One year Post KOTOR: Revan struggles with the life she must lead

Well done and written, the idea that the instant she became a Jedi she no longer had a choice in her own life might be enough to sustain her, but the pain of that realization is great.

Pick of the Week

I was very impressed with this story. I've been looking for an author who succeeded in getting inside of Revan's head and this has been my favorite "Reven POV" so far. You managed to bring into the light basically what I had been thinking about Reven myself - after completing KOTOR I and II - and you did it beautifully.

I'll definitely look for more of your work.

Brava! :)

I really love the idea for this story, very nice. I really wish Revan could just have a nice peaceful life but it's not gonna happen I guess. It always seems to go that way, whenever the galaxy needs a hero, that hero gives up a normal life and surrenders to their "destiny". But, it always feels like they deserve better ya know? It be nice if she could just stay with Carth instead of having to save the galaxy all the time. Great work. I'm not sure if you're planning more, but I would love to see it!