Oh crap! More plz!

Please continue this story! im waiting eagerly to see if u did! I love the begining! :)

This is great, please write the next chapter soon!

really? And you just drop it there? It's been almost 4 years, update alrready!

/ah this is so good, you have to contiune this!

It was Adonis.

haha. i like repeating the last line of the chapter... i don't know why... =D

awsome! is this it? another chapter would be awsome! i love the way you had bb (bm) talking to himself.

very cool

Good start. Nice description of the scene.

Keep the good writing.