This is good, REALLY good! I like the way the counselor has become some sort of confidant for Logan. Dana and Logan are in character too, which is rare for these kind of stories!

I can't wait to finish reading this! Well Done (SILENT CHEERING)

First off, i will start with the tiniest, and only thing i didn't like about the whole story, the epilogue. It was good, i just usually don't like epilogues that take place years after the story ends...maybe it's because there is no possible way for a sequel...i don't know (shrugs shoulders).

Next, on to all the great stuff in this story. I like the drama, and the deceite, and the lust...basically everything. You did a great job of keeping a feel of Zoey 101 but made it a lot less teeny booper like.

The way you have them almost talk to themselves as they are talking to each other (Logan and Dana) and talk to themselves is very unique, and it makes the story one of a kind.

You did everything classy, you pumped up the sexual content to a point where if it was a movie it would be rated R but you didn't go into vulgar detail, you kept it at a good level of description.

The story was GREAT...without a doubt one of the top 3 fanfics i have ever read...and I only read FFVI and Z101 fanfiction. So if you have any idea who Ashbear is (she's like the Stephen King or Tolkien of FF fanfiction) you know why. Still, i actually think this is better than some of her stuff, and she is my HERO (not really, but you get the exagerration) Without a doubt, this is one of the best fanfictions on this ENTIRE SITE.

Keep up the great work,
Trim59

Just started reading it and...WOW. There is such a lack of quality stories, and even fewer to pick from that are DL. Great story, that's all I can say. Oh yeah, I hope they get together but its a DL so i know they will ;P lol...Trim59

Supercute Dana-Logan

Poor Logan

Finally Dana's admitting what she should have done chapters earlier. I guess they will survibe, thus it's not too late.

As long as Dana always comes back to Logan, it wouldn't matter.

Dana should finally forget about the Charlatan Sam, dernit.

Of course Dana loves Logan, not Sam the Scam, her own words notwithstanding.

I don't know the key phrase *sigh*
Anyways Logan is the right choice for Dana, not Scam Liar.

Dana has to choose Logan, or ...

It's time to end the denial.

Of course Logan would choose Dana over money, as already known by T-S h i z.

Dana should finally forget about Sam the scam

So Dana remains in denial ...