Ah, so succinct, and so beautifully written.

You've made me love SongxZuko a billion times more. Kudos. :)

Oh wow. I love Song's sly little snark at the end. Yes, that's right boys, just because she's a commoner does not mean she's harmless!
What a beautiful, simple piece. It still manages to convey so much!

Song is a Mary Sue and doesn't deserve Zuko. Zutara forever!

AW

short and sweet. i love the line about iroh choosing to shut up. it was funny.

Why is there a hyphen in 'spear-fish'? o_o But other than that, wow, great fic :) Brief, concise, yet still beautifully written. The feelings from it are just so intense, and you can really see the entire scene before you—fantastic fic. Adding this to my favorites. :)

- hl

OMG song/zuko YES.

and it's well written too

Such is the power of your magnificent story-telling. I don't even have to know what happened to feel touched. >_

I love Song! I'm so glad you wrote it.

Nicely done!

YES! Zuko and Song! You're my hero, man!

Um...yeah. I've just been looking for some Zuko/Song fiction for a few days now. I still don't think they have her on the fanfic character list...

But the story: very nice, pretty well written. Everything was pretty in character. I suck at reviews. Nice job!