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| proud-yaoi-fangirl 2008-07-16 ch 1, | abuseOh no! Shuichi is gonna die! Tohma wouldnt hurt Yuki (well at least not in any perminate way... but hes gonna kill shu-chan |
| kaname-luvr 2008-07-03 ch 1, | abuseOMG! THAT WAS JUST HALARIOUS! SPECIALLY THE WHOLE STEALLIN THE CAR FROM TOHMA! LOL...I HAD A GOOD LAUGH!TOTALLY AWESOME! |
| Da One Me to Pwn You All 2008-04-26 ch 1, | abuseHahaha Amazing. Good job! |
| DMHPluv 2008-02-13 ch 1, | abuseomg! that ending was friggin' amazing! ur my hero!! |
| Hollandi 2007-11-16 ch 1, | abuseThat was brilliant. |
| crazyyaoiluver 2007-08-12 ch 1, | abusehaha poor tohma |
| supershu-chan 2007-07-10 ch 1, | abuse'Kay, so by now, I've figured out that you are amazing. "My boyfriend is sheltering me so I can get lung cancer." Best line ever. Thank you so much for sharing your fics! You've won yourself a new fan. :D |
| inu adic 2007-06-28 ch 1, | abuseYAH! I LOVE IT! My friend read it too me a while back so this is the secound time I've read it! STILL AWSOME! I add this to Favorites! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! |
| moon71 2007-06-09 ch 1, | abuseI do love this story (I've read it several times now!) - I'm a sucker for "missing scenes" in general, but I could really see this happening in the manga or even the anime. In the best possible way, it had the flavour of a scene from a rather zany (sorry I hate that word but I couldn't think of a better one!) rom-com! First of all it was really good fun - my favourite scene had to be Eiri's attempt at an ultra-cool James Bond style moment when he attempts to raise the convertible hood falling flat when it failed to function, with the rain and the hail following a close second. But the best part of this was the characterisation. Shuichi's first person POV is not that easy to do, or at least I don't see it done well that often - but I really thought you let him speak the way he would. He isn't constantly whining and he isn't completely trodden underfoot by Yuki - he varies from love to annoyance to dejection in quick flashes, just as he does in the original, and argues back when he feels Yuki is being unreasonable. I also thought you captured his insecurities and his frustation after the wedding business very well. It did seem around that time he was constantly battling enemies from all sides - first Eiri dumps him, then there's the Aizawa incident, then Eiri essentially dumps him AGAIN... and yet his spirit never remains broken for long. Your Eiri was very good too and so in character - he is bad tempered and cynical, but not actually nasty, and you've captured the wry sense of humour which always stops him being an unsympathetic personality. As to the Tohma bashing - well, I have a love-hate relationship with him. I've never particularly seen him as a jealous lover of Eiri or even as someone who was automatically against the Shuichi-Eiri affair; so far as I remember he openly supports it in the manga until Eiri falls sick and Tohma gets the blame from Mika, and in the anime again he tells a doubtful Mika he thinks Shuichi will do Eiri good, until things start getting extreme. But then again he isn't the most sympathetic character and is at times downright annoying (and his overprotectiveness of Eiri does seem to do more harm than good!) so it was good fun to see him take a bit of a thrashing! The final "carjacking" was priceless and it was nice to see Eiri actively defending Shuichi and their relationship for once! |
| YuuriUchiha 2007-04-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseOMG~! YESH~! they left tohma about time someone did something to him ha~! lol |
| twighlightangel61090 2006-12-28 ch 1, | abusethat was funny, Seguchi is an ** though...well i guess i already knew that lol. ~Jess |
| Elfangor89 2006-08-09 ch 1, | abuseYES SWEET REVENGE ON TOHMA! |
| Patpat 2006-07-21 ch 1, | abuseYour little one shot is just full of fun! Really good! Thanks a lot for that really good moment you give us with it. |
| MistressKiwi 2006-07-17 ch 1, | abuseThis is one of the best Tohma bashing stories I've ever read. XD I loved it, and the part where Shuichi flashed Yuki's father was my fave in the manga. ~MistressKiwi |
| Kiryuu500 2006-04-30 ch 1, | abuseohmygod! haha... i've never really liked Tohma... haha... go Yuki and Shu! but can't Tohma sue them? He could make their lives a living hell... he'd better not or i'll kill him... or better yet.. give him to my friend who'll put him in bondage and rape him. ^__^ Great story! |