The story itself is okay but it just seems too negative and the storyline seems rushed. There were some parts I liked. When people look for stories where Jack survives they allready don't care how well the story matches the movie so people need to be creative. There is some impossibilities in the timeline and how people would act. First there were no freeways in 1912 the railroad was the mane mode of transportation. Highways and freeways did not come into existance untill the 50s and 60s. 7 out of 10

WHAT KIND OF TWISTED MIND DO YOU HAVE. OH SURE SAVE JACK THEN JUST KILL HIM. WHAT KIND OF GAME OF ARE YOU RUNNING. *WILD CUSSING GOING ON* Other then that great story =)

i like this story so far i cant wait to finish it!

Aw man, and here I was hoping that Jack could live after he actually survived the sinking. There are just too many people determined to make him dead, aren't there? Oh well. I really enjoyed the story up to the last chapter. I apologize, but I just don't think I'll necessarily have the stamina to get through the sequel after that...

The fact that I have read this story must tell you that it is well written. I cannot read a badly written fanfic. You've done an awesome job on this an keep on writing!

omg! so effin' awesome!

great job!

ACK! I hate you! You killed off Jack! How could you?

good story, but why did u have to make him die? and like that as well??

good chapter, but the Titanic hit the iceberg on the 14th April not the 12th.

really good story so far

i'm confused on why did she have to give the baby up

why did Jack have to die and why did Cal have to get the baby i'm so confused

nice job so far on the story

well thank you very much for this chapter!I cried!I blame you!

I really did wish that jack hadnt died or at least that rose could have kept the baby!

Sweet story update soon!