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| TheLocket 2007-09-10 ch 1,  | abuseAw, that's cute. . . |
| smileyGGfan 2006-04-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseaww it was a sweet prego fic. not 2 crazy about the name Raymond, but its ur fic so u get 2 do with it what u like (lol well u dared me 2 tell u what i really thought). good story :) |
| hollywoodgrl 2006-03-31 ch 1, | abusei liked it. it's so true what you said about men being all tough, but as soon as they hold that baby you can really see the softie in them. good story...i'm just sad it's only a one-shot. |
| love me xx love me not 2006-03-30 ch 1, | abuseLOVED it. it was so adorable! it was so cutee |
| CharmedGurlie 2006-03-30 ch 1, | abuseThat was really good! It was cute and I loved the flashback! |
| chmelms 2006-03-30 ch 1, | abuseI like it all except for the fact that Luke said "Lor". Luke doesn't call Lorelai that ever. That was a nickname from Chris. But anyhow, the storyline was good and proud pappa Luke was cute. You should continue the story from here. |
| sapphirestar820 2006-03-30 ch 1, | abuseaw cute |
| buckice 2006-03-30 ch 1, | abuseReally really well done! Usually LL stories (including mine) focus on Lorelai, so it's nice to get the unusual Luke only point of view. And nice to read about Luke and Lorelai so happy. I totally thought the important day was going to be the wedding until I got to the hospital room part. I kinda like it. I'm so tired of LL wedding going ons. Ug. Only one complaint, at one point Luke calls Lorelai 'Lor' and personally I don't think I've ever heard him do that. I don't think he ever would. Only Christopher does. But overall a job well done! |
| Christina 2006-03-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt is a really cute story |
| luke4me 2006-03-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love it! I love to see Luke happy. |