i loved it. poor draco. is this story finished?

Poor little boy Draco, what a mess he got himself into. Good story, I liked.

Very good! I loved it! Keep updating please!1!!

HI^^

I’m a Harry Potter fan from China and I really like your fanfictions...

Would you mind giving me the pleasure to translate this into Chinese and share with the HP fandom in China?

I know many of them will just love your story!

Anyway, thanks a lot ^_^

Yours sincerely,

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Waiting for a good or bad news ^^

Melancholy. I can see the brooding wizard looking out the barred window, contemplating most moodily. I really don't have anything to say except it really snared my attention.

wow. That's intense.
It would be kind of cool if you made it a story though, ya know? Like have Draco run away or something so he could fight Voldemort or something. I don't know. I'd totally be interested in it like majorly. Well, take care.

- VintagePirate

YOu should continue it. It has a lot of potential.

Wow.
just wow.
I love your writing style, It seems so much like j.k.'s.
I sometimes find myself thinking things like, 'J.K.! no! I mean Author!no!'
Can I make a suggestion? Can you make a sequel were Hermione comes and saves him? Please?!?!

OMG serves him rght(sort of...)

oh that was a really good one shot and i wouldn't have been surprised if that WAS the last chapter in the book. I love your writing style, and if i was to say one critical thing about it would be that it was too good. :D

Wow!
That is so realistic! I totally would have pictured that to happen!

Interesting perspective here. Poor Draco.

Whoa. That was really good. Great way to put it. *shakes head* He missed his chance. Poor Draco. Great one-shot!

This was get. I have an Idea you should write a story about what would have happened if he had changed his mine and accepted dumbledore's offer cause your a really good writer!

o0o0o0o00 thats a gud story, i hope u do more lyk it, well not like it just as gud as it if u no wat i meen