have u read the third book? well read it! cuz

*read below if u want the spoiler*

HE COMES BACK TO LIFE!

This is a very beautifully written piece. The only thing wrong with it is that its so short. I was just getting into it, when it was over. You are obviously a skilled writer - you brought a tear back to my eye - and I think it would be awesome if you considered making this piece a little longer.

Great last paragraph. It has lovely wording. Keep writing!

brava cept she said she'd preserve the body so only she could look upon it but oh wel

You could really turn this into an amazing oneshot; it's so short! And the concept was heart wrenching. Love eet!

Oh, that's short and sweet. I haven't read Inkspell yet so I don't know who the hell Roxane yet, or that DUSTFINGER DIED! NO! HE'S MY FAVORITE CHARACTER!

Btw, I love the last line. :) But I'm still sad that DF died...

Nice work. Your characterization of Roxane is perfect - good job with that.

The last sentence is probably the best, though I really think the whole drabble is written well.

Aw, cute. *Grabbs nerest person and sobs hystericly into their sholder* Um, ya. Anyway, nice drabble. You are, like the third person to write a Dustfinger/Roxane story, and the other two are humor fics. You should be congradulated.

*stars in eyes*

I...

Love...

You.

Seriously.

Okay, first the title Resolutions was creepy. And now we're like... so incredibly alike it scares me.

(I almost cried when Dustfinger died, too. *sniffles*)

This was great- it was a nice piece of ending dramaluff. wo0t, I'm creating words. I