"You’re dying to kiss me, aren’t you?” Oh foreshadowing. :D Nice fic, hope they don't die. =P

Heehee. Cute. Keep writing!
Toodles,
bobalina

This was adorable. Pip has a way with words to comfort Seras.

Nice! =)

Aw, that was so adorable.

Interactions between those two are precious.

Fantastic, Thess. That was touching chat.

*-* Marisa *-*

Very nice, I think you did a great job of keeping everyone OC. I wonder if you are going to skip ahead and write about the pending "big battle". Hope you do, till next chap!

very nice. i hope you will write a long, beautiful, romantic story about these two. with lots of . . . heat. ;) keep up the great work.

wonderful as always! i can totally see this happening. they were both well in character and it was all believable.

ya done good. (an my inner english major screams in agony.)

Awsome chapter.

So insightful, Lore! I truly like how you write those two.