  Nae-Nae 2008-01-31 . chapter 8 Plz update. I've been waiting forever to read the rest of this wonderful story. I'm begging you...UPDATE! |
  madamwolf 2007-11-25 . chapter 8hey, uh, update? maybe sometime in the near future? I love Torn and Keira together and there aren't enough good long stories about them. (ones that bash Ashelin too, hehe I hate the **) Besides, Torn is really hot, if you don't do it for me or any of your other fans, do it for Torn. He's too friggin hot to be left unfinished in a story like this. |
 ILuvCaboose 2007-10-25 . chapter 8luv it! plz update soon, its the best story i've read |
| leslie 2007-08-04 . chapter 1 i love it! |
| Sera 2007-05-14 . chapter 8 oh-please update this!! Its very good! |
| A 2007-05-13 . chapter 1 UPDATE!
please? |
| reindeer sausage 2007-01-13 . chapter 8 Please update soon! :) |
 Silver Horror 2006-08-17 . chapter 1cool! COOL! COOL! |
| Simone3191 2006-08-09 . chapter 8 Love it can't wait til the next chapter and do update!great story |
| Inkbl0t 2006-08-09 . chapter 8 FINALLY! When I checked up on my email, your's was the first fic alert I looked at! And I really like this chapter. The story really getting interesting: Torn's self-doubt because of his age, Ashelin's sluttiness, Ashelin's and Jak's jealousy... I'm really really excited. |
| Sugi 2006-08-09 . chapter 8 Yay! I'm so glad you updated! Great chapter! Congrats on the Permit! Update soon! |
| silveremerald202 2006-08-04 . chapter 7 You.
Are.
A.
Miracle worker.
I'd better explain. My friend used to hate boys. She found them one of, if not the most, vile, evil, disgusting creatures on earth.
Then she read your stories.
Now, she likes boys.
I don't know how you did it, but you did. And I love this story! It's cute. And funny. Please please please update soon! |
| Kyane Black 2006-07-26 . chapter 7 even if da catfight was harmless i would never expected KEIRA to fight DEAR (emphasize that)ashy..it was good!
i likey the actiony between Dr. Dread and Aqua!
i say to..er..'heat things up'?
it will make the plot more interesting especially if ashy finds them as an 'item'!
oh and dont forget ol' jakie and jinxy!!
three owrds:
more More MORE
obnoxious words from
-kyane black |
| Lady-Nerevari 2006-07-18 . chapter 7 w00tness! It happened! It happened! That pain in the ** ** of a baroness finally got what was coming to her! YAHOO! *begins to spontaneously dance while chanting the mantra 'Ashelin got whomped, Ashelin got whomped' in a evilly amused voice* Sorry, I've been waiting for that to happen for quite a while now, I hate that... that ^woman^. Funny, in one of my fics I was gonna blow her to pieces with an eco blast... but I think I like this better. As usual, nice work. :) |
| Shadow Systems 2006-06-22 . chapter 7 HORRAY! this kicked so much good booty! Please write more! PLEASE? |
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