I love this story

that was so good, i felt so sorry for charlie and i loved the name emma, so fitting

Overall this story was very well thought out and written well. When Emma was born and Carlisle took her away, the gesture reminded me that newborns need to eat very soon after their birth. I think that it may have taken a bit too long to get to the feeding.
Job well done! I loved it!

Very Very well written! My favorite type of Bella Edward story!

Oh. My. God. That was awesome! Impossible, but awesome. Two parts stood out for me, though. One, "Then, in an instant, little baby Cullen kicked again. I swear this kid learned from Chuck Norris himself." And two, when Alice came in and 'stole' Emma. I can just imagine her shooting in the room and leaving with the baby, leaving Edward and Bella, even with vampire reflexes, totally dazed. I lovey-love love-love this story.

That's good, different than the other fanfic's I've read, but definately good! I'm happy that I found this fanfic.

aww.. great ending.

If we had star ratings you'd get maybe 50 from me! It was absolutely amazing!

Wow. Your writing is so good! It flows very nicely.

I'm not really sure about the fandom it's in but I tried to get around that teeny detail.

Anyway, keep up the great work! :)

omg!!i cant wait till u r done updating!pls hurry!i really want to knoow what happens!

This is a very good story! ...But this is the last chapter? That's so sad! i thought for sure there would be a long story about Charlie finding out about Bella, and them being Vampires, and a big plot twist! It makes me very sad that this is the end.

That was so cool! I loved it! It was different! i couldn't get chapter 6 to load for some reason though, i hope i didn't miss too much, i'll try back later anyway. So, i read the whole thing minus chapter 6. It rocked! Keep writing!

c'mon all together now, AW! That was so cute! I loved it and little Emma too!

I really liked the direction your story took.

It was an interesting possibility to ponder, and I'd enjoy reading more about it.

that was so sweet i feel bad for charlie. i wish you would continue with there daughter growing older and stuff that would be cool. anyway i thought this was a really great story:)