enjoyed;curious about will happen;please write more

I love where this is going! I can't wait until you update! (If you update) I really hope you do, because I really like your chapter!

Raven isn't really goth, she's just dark. Many people think she is but I don't see black make-up. let alone any make-up. Also she would be wearing all black, hello? I don't think blue is black.

I too, would faint from the pink. I hate pink, and no, I'm not a goth. I'm just a regular person, who's tomboy, but hates sports.

Anyways, forgve my blabbering and update soon. I'd like to see where this goes.

interesting thats all i can say,i know it will probally get better

This story sounds good so keep it up and make chapters longer. Update soon xx