Are you EVER going to freakin' update this story or what? I need to see how the heroes stop the Shadow Man and his cronies(I also need to know what Asteroth looks like). Plus, if you finish this, I have an idea you can use for a sequel-Zim and Gaz steal tech from Dr. Wakeman and the Fentons and create a robot army and the Odd Trio needs to team up with Dib to stop them.

Keep up the good work.

*“When he shoved me, everything went so slowly…I heard the gun go off, but it seemed like forever before anything actually happened. But…I saw Dad get shot…It hit him right in the chest… and he fell to the ground screaming…I didn’t understand what was happening right then…but…he died right there in my arms…”* Sounds a lot like what happened to Uncle Ben in ‘Spiderman’. This was all very well thought out _

Very interesting first chapter! Lesse... Danny Phantom, Rugrats: All Grown Up, My Life As A Teenage Robot, Invader Zim... What's not to like?

BTW, I gots me a pic I drew of Gaz with her PAK:

http:/ x2. putfile. com/ 6/ 17116204731. jpg

Check it out.

You gotta update this soon!

May the Force be with you!

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This is a great story, and I look forward to seeing what happens next.

*“I’m happy with my current height, mountain man,” Kimi sneered, “At least I don’t get brain damage from bonking my head on doorways like you do.”* WOOT! Kwan is a mountain man! I never would’ve thought of that brain damage joke _ but it’s true!

*Dash and Kwan screamed as their heads were swirled in the murky waters of the toilet bowl.* Serves them right! I wish Danny would do that in the cartoon one of these days…

*"No sweat. Can't be any crazier than my dad's inventions…" Tommy began.* I don’t know what cartoon this guy and Kimi comes from, but I highly doubt it… Danny’s parents are just way too weird to be beaten!

*Wonderful!" Dr. Wakeman smiled. "This is perfect! I hope you don't mind but I brought my daughter along, I think you kids would get along great!"* Um… I wonder if Danny and the others consider robots anything like ghost…? I mean there is Skullker, and he wears a lot of robotic stuff…

*“No!” Danny said, “Not the Fenton Belt!”* I know that the Fenton Belt takes out all of his powers and all, but that makes him seem like he’s afraid to wear a belt…

*“Yes, remember?” Maddie said opening the door, “Professor Membrane couldn’t make it today, so I invited over…”* Professor Membrane as in the Professor Membrane from Invader Zim? WOOT! I hope Zim and Dib are here as well _ I LOVE them! And GIR!

*"Oh my gosh!” Jack yelled, “That ghost has metamorphosis powers! He changed into our son!"* Jack is such an idiot! Even when Danny tells him who he is, Jack still doesn’t believe him…

*As Jenny picked herself up off the ground, a horrible thought occurred to her. Normally, during a fight, her mom would be yelling at her, telling her to be careful, but she hadn’t heard a thing from her. Jenny looked around fearfully; she didn’t see her mom anywhere in sight. She stood up and turned to Vexus. "Where's my mom!" Jenny demanded.* Poor Jenny… Maybe Dr. Wakeman is alright… I mean, Gaz is with her and all…

*“Dear, dear sweet Maddie,” he said angrily, “It pains me to see you defend this repugnant tub of lard. It’ll pain me even more to have to destroy you along with him!” With that he readied both of his hands to destroy the Fentons.* Vlad would never hurt Maddie! Maybe Jack, but never Maddie! He loves her too much… I mean, he even wants to adopt Jazz and Danny!

*“Fine,” Gaz said, “That’s the way you wanna play it? I can play just as dirty.” Suddenly, Gaz removed her coat to reveal an Irken PAK attached to her back as four large metallic spider-legs extended from it.* Why does Gaz have an Irken PAK? The only way she could’ve gotten that would’ve been from Zim… What did you do to Zim? He can’t be dead!

*“Now let me get this straight,” Maddie said, “Danny, YOU’RE the Phantom?”* sure took them long enough to figure that one out… of course they really didn’t figure it out at all…

Please continue soon! This is a great story and I can’t wait to hear more of it!

Welcome back this great story! I know what's happening next but those who hasn't seen it will have to see for themselves. Great revising. Can't wait to see more.