Awesome and beautifully written. I especially loved that you ended with Connor and Lorne, and it makes me think of Lorne saying, "I loved that little baby..." Old regrets, gone now. Thanks for sharing!

I don't know whether to think this was cheering and fluffy or downright depressing so I'll just go with something in the middle and say thank you, I suppose, for writing something I could totally see happening even if it still involves Lorne being completely broken after the Battle.

Bravo.

Ahh, this was a lovely piece.

Very good. Touching, illuminating and utterly true to character. My favorites are I, II and IV. Extra kudos for making Fred true to character without being as annoying as I usually found her on the show.

CONNOR! WOOHOO!

It was so sad tho.

Wat the hell's he doing "bonding" with Lorne? O_o

But I guess it was kinda needed and the song was perfekt, very kool of u.

I just luv the word I saw tho.

CONNOR written so many times HAHAHAHA /krazy/

Was the pik Angel was sketching his kid? How sweet if it was.

I luvved this. Are u gonna continue? U should...

XD

The first was so sad (not pathetic), kinda. And the last was sweet.