o my gos you killed robin hes my fav next to the ninja turtles

i loved it!
i dont think ur a **, and i dont want u to die!lol
besides, if u died who would write me storys that make me want to cry!
i was just how i imagened robin dieing!
once again, iloved it!

That was a very beautiful story. you made me cri. :)

Oh my. I love it. So beautiful. Amazing.

~Kicon

Not horrible. Not good. Reeks of 'cliche'. Even if it was written in twenty minutes, it's littered with quite a few spelling and grammar mistakes. Starfire doesn't usually use contractions, like 'you'll', and she seems to use quite a few. Of course, this was probably written a while ago and I'm sure some of the mechanical issues aren't present in your later works.

Sob sob, I my god that was so sad. I'm still sobbing.

That was so good, but yet so sad!

OMG!

You had me in tears! You do emotions extremely well. I can feel the pain Starfire is in, its so tangable. And you just know she's gonna wear that ring for the rest of her life.

Poor Robin.

Cheers
Kryalla

OMG I can't believe you killed Robin! reserect him now!

Wow, it's really, really well written.

First things first: wow.

Second: I love the emotions in this story. They are expressed so well, so true, and that's fantastic, especially since you do not overdo it (which is easily done). A good story can totally disappear in emotion, and sometimes that is the point, too, but you have to have some kind of story-line attached, which I think you create very beautifully in this short story. Most in the first chapter , though: I understand this was originally meant to be a one-shot, and I think it would have worked better that way, but then again, the second chapter attaches very neatly to the story. It just has less point, you know? Maybe it’s just me (:

And last: I love how you take writing seriously - I don't mean this particular story, but all the stories I've had the pure pleasure of reading from you. Hobby or not, you're really putting something in these stories, and they are all very, VERY well-written. There are a lot of stories out there, where you can clearly feel the lack of work being put in it. Well, it's different with you (even in stories just popping in to your mind, if I have read correctly), and that shines through. Basically, I admire your work. Took me long enough to get to the point, I guess - bear with me ;)

Oh...My...God...That is the best story i have read in my whole entire life! I know storys, And this one totally rocks! really great! 10 out of 10! Woohoo! *claps*

omg that was one of the sadest stories i have ever read i made me cry wow that was a wonderful please write more.
a fan of the teen titans and a fan of ur stories

OMGOMGOMG! that was so way awesome!! i mean i have like forever thought that robin and starfire should get married and have a kid..but i guess thats kinda impossible with your story, but omg that made me cry! no joke! ask anyone in my house right now i was reading it and sponraneously broke out into tears, but that is a compliment! anyway..i think you have some awesome talent..and im glad to know im ont the only one who writes about teen titans! i mean im a total dork but i dont care..well look out for my stories i think ill submit them this summer! the two im thinking are called "His Final Breath" and "Black Roses" well great job..and write another ill be looking!

~*Cait*~ >R

that was so sad i actually cried when i read it. But u did a very good job on it.