yay! you updated :)

please update!

please?

PLEASE! This is such a good fic! I actually really want to know what happens next!

Wow, I really enjoy this! I like how you still contain some of the old rivalry between Pinto and Kestrel. I can't wait to see more of the chapters!

Great story so far Please update soon! I can't wait!

Wow. That was building up for sixteen years, and it came out. Mumpo needs to get over Kess, she may be with them but he needs to focus on Pinto! Continue on!

Your obedient servant and angel.

What happened! Dear God what happened! and Pinto's pregnant! I must read on.

Your obedient servant and angel

this story is really getting good. please post more :)

Hmmph.

Update darling!

That is all D

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How unfair is that? That makes me really angry esp. at all those who are angry at Pinto. It always bugs me when people get mad at you for saying how you really feel. And Hooray for WOF!

wowwowWOW!

plz keep going? i'm begging you!

*gasp* How dare he! that's really good! keep writing!

This story is probably abandoned or something coz I think it was written ages ago but if the authour is still listening...or writing! Can you write more? It's really good and I wanna know whats happenend

Hm... I wonder what Pinto has done, the story seems interesting enough so far, but I think you should tell what she's done soon.

I'm not sure what being pregnant has to do with it though... and she has to apologise to Bowman...

(gasps) Did she sleep with her brother Bowman!

Ha ha ha, I think that's kind of unlikely though, that's just what my feeble mind came up with on quick anlysis.

Or whatever.

HELLO! could u update please i want 2 no wot happened dont just leave it on a cliff hanger

hey, this is a great story line, but i am a bit confused... why is Mumpo angry with Pinto if they are married and she is pregnant... did she cheat or something? im sorry if it is supposed to be obvious whats going on, but i am a little confused.