This is a beautiful chapter.

Certainly one hell of a punch line

wow... that was just... wow. It was so amazingly beautiful and heartbreaking... I've got tears in my eyes! Great fic!

Sweet and sad. The image I had of a young Cloud holding on to Sephiroth's hand as he sucked his thumb was just to adorable.

gosh... I loved this one

They way you express each sense, you do it soo perfect that I could feel it; when you talked about the taste I could feel'em in my tongue; or when you talked about touch, the last part when Seph's roar, made my skin crawl, just prefect.

Just a thing, I didn't understand the end, perhaps is my bad english or the fact that Im tired and is like 1 am already ahahaha, however...

I really loved it~ PERFECT

(thanks, It inspired me to make a serie of draws if you want to see em plz let me know:

This story... kicks **. v_v I really like it, the last sentence made me literary squee in delight. *absolutely adores stories like that*

Oh god oh god oh god... You're awesome and I want to grovel at your feet, but I think I'm unworthy... ^^ THIS WAS BEAUTIFUL! *squeels* I love it. You're awesome... I said that didn't I? Awe some... I've been breaking up words a lot for God knows what reason... But anyways. Love it. You're a doll. *giggles* ... Doll...

Wow...so beautiful and sad and heartwrenchingly perfect. I absolutely loved it, from the first lines about their childhood to the very last one where Cloud realizes that Seph doesn't remember him. Gorgeous in every possible way!

really good story though the ending was quite sad ^-^

sorry too lazy to login but this is a freakin' awesome fic! I love it! And not just the sexy yaoi bits ^^ EVERYHTING! *calps* a brilliant job, I commend you! Thank you for this wonderful fanfic :D

The ending caught me. Holy crap...Wow.

Well that appeals to both fan service and a take at the backstory of Kingdom Hearts. Very well done. Gorgeous.
Although the end is pretty heartbreaking. -cries-
~A~

Very nice. I was a little hesitant to read, but it was certainly worthwhile! I like how you captured each sense (which was the whole point?) and then in Sephiroth's scene the comment about being scrutinized... Heh, enjoyed it. The whole fic was very well written, and the ending is just so bitter. An A++ read.
Poor Cloud. Poor Sephiroth.

If I wasn't a pile of goo in my chair right now, my heart would probably breaking. *Faves faves faves*

Those last two lines almost made me cry. Beautiful fic, great charecterization and ...hell, its just so damn pretty.