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Kuro Yasumi
2009-11-21 . chapter 1
This story makes me sad, yet happy at the same time.

I empathize with Naruto a lot...being ignored is FAR WORSE than anything that can really happen to you. Being ignored means nobody cares...and that's the worst and most heartbreaking truth of all. Everyone wants to be loved. EVERYONE. And you know what's worse than people ignoring you? People that should care, but just turn a blind eye to what happens to you. That to me, says how much you REALLY mean to them.

This fic makes me happy because Team 7 has finally seen the true Naruto that he always hides behind a goofy grin and a cheerful disposition, and are FINALLY going to do something about it. Honestly, we need to see more of these fics, where the characters go through self-exploration and decide to help other people instead of themselves.

I really enjoyed this fic. It really makes you think and appreciate what you have now if you didn't have it before...so thank you for sharing this wonderful piece...and I'm happy that you found some friends that really care about you. :D

Ja,
Dark Respite
Cristalake
2009-10-08 . chapter 1
... That broke my heart. It's soft, it's simple and they're just too late. Really beautiful.
extreme kiwi
2009-08-18 . chapter 1
I've got the same problem w/my parents too.Only they are homophobic.I liked this story.I think it deserves a sequel though...
Jesus Power
2009-08-01 . chapter 1
This... this story touched me.

Thank you.

<3
HikariYamino
2009-05-26 . chapter 1
i almost teared up when Naruto was reaching his limit.. You are my IDOL! GAH!! SERIOUSLY! *goes on to read your Inuyasha story and prepares handkerchief*
MichaelaTheUchiha
2009-04-08 . chapter 1
T__T
Bitter Faerie
2009-04-05 . chapter 1
I liked it. You have a talent with words.
UndergroundSoul
2009-02-16 . chapter 1
Aw, poor Naru! I feel so bad for him. I think you really got the emotion right, but I doubt the rest of the team would be that harsh. Kakashi would be slyer, slipping in comments Naruto really didn't understand, but knew were little insults. Sakura would freak out a little more, maybe hit him? Sasuke was near perfect, but he doesn't really put a name in each sentence-'dope, stupid, idiot.'
Other than that, I really, really like it. ^^
ObsessionsGoTooFar
2009-01-28 . chapter 1
I liked this a lot, you wrote it really well! ^^ Great job :)
Kouhai-sempai
2009-01-27 . chapter 1
-scolds- Don't ever say that you don't deserve the friends you have or that you feel 'selfish.' If you really didn't deserve that love, you wouldn't feel as happy as you do now. As far as selfishness goes, everyone is selfish. Don't believe me? Just think about it. Even the person who gives every part of themselves to help others is doing so in part to feel good about themselves. I suppose the selfishness of those kind of people seems justifiable (and it is), but it's still there. It still exists. Even those types of people have done things they regret. I say that you should never worry whether you're 'worth it' or not or whether you're 'selfish' or not. Just be grateful for what you have, deserving or not. Besides, in the end, the people who seem to deserve love and support least of all are really the ones who need that love and support the most. Just be grateful for what you have, and those around you will be grateful to you.

-Aly

P.S.-Sorry for the lecture (you probably know most of this, anyway). I just hate when people suggest that they don't deserve what they have. It makes my eye twitch.

P.P.S.-Believe me, I'm well aware that everyone has secrets that they're hesitant to tell about (even to friends), but if you ever find someone who really cares about you and who you really trust, you should offer them at least a peak into who you used to be. They won't dislike you for it. In fact, if they really care, they'll be happy just to know more about you. Again, sorry for the lecture. I'm in a philisophical mood today. -_-;
Crimson Hope
2009-01-16 . chapter 1
I know how you feel. I try to seem happy all th time but I'm dying inside. I relate to naruto so much. Nobody deserves this nobody at all
RevengeoftheForsaken
2008-09-06 . chapter 1
Wow... O.O Naruto really should vent out his anger at someone in the series... or at least hint something behind his mask...
AndYesThereWillBeAngst
2008-08-23 . chapter 1
That just proved how bitchy team seven ws back then...and now,sorta.But anyway that was good keep it up.
randomly
2008-06-30 . chapter 1
I really like your stories ^^
I'm going to read sticks and stones, too, i don't have time right now, but i have to do it when i do get the time - your writing is addictive ^^

You're quite good at portraying the emotions, i really like the way you did it in this one, original ;)
MysteryLady-Tx
2008-06-28 . chapter 1
WOW I was so sure that I'd read this before...well then its about time I reviewed it, heheh

I really liked it and I loved the fact that his smile just got BIGGER the madder he got, it is a way some people deal w/anger grin and bear it type of way, but I also like the fact that he actually let them see what they were doing to him w/o him having to go postal on them...

THANKS:"D
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