Ah.. Everything's getting so heartbreaking. D:
Natsuki better realize what's happening soon, and stop Shizuru from distancing herself even more. /:

LOL. Disastrous! XDD Ah, Natsuki attempting to cook is always funny.

Eh, the end of this chapter confused me. But I guess I'll get it sooner or later. xP

LOL! Haruka, being lynched? XD

'...looked blackly at the...' I think you meant 'blankly.'
'...what does Natsuki has in...' Should be 'have' because of tense.
And it should be 'apologize'

Hmm, I just wonder what Shizuru is apologizing for. Don't tell me she's purposely doing all that work to avoid Natsuki. D:

Finally! Natsuki finally comes to her senses! Shizuru is happy, Natsuki is happy and I'm happy.

wow, this was a touching story. almost cried at the scene at the villa. haha. that was so sad. ^^

nice fic^^

That was a really sweet last chapter--Hell, really sweet ff, period! I was giggling at the end, I swear to god ^o~ Mikoto was so funny, wondering why her eyes were being covered. Anyway, really cute ff. It was a really feel-good one, even if it earned its genre 'angst' in the process!

I love the concept of Shizuru using her naginata training to suppress her feelings for Natsuki. And you wrote these scenes in a way that reflected her emotional angst perfectly. The scenes were wonderfully written, so much so that I read them over and over again just to feel the emotions Shizuru and Natsuki were feeling.

I hope you will consider writing another ShizNat fic(or a KnM one).

I LOVE THIS FIC!

I cannot thank you enough for sharing your stories. loved it.

it's been a very wonderful, angsty ride. very beautiful. thank you very much for the much needed and loved shiznat romance! :) see you next time! :)

peace!

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omg omg omg -i tink tis is one of te few fics i havent being able to review...or did i?- anyway so col cant wait for "being with her" XDD plz continue as soon as u can XD

Well, glad to you that you are still around.
I guess I'll have to prepare myself for the 'angst' ahead...
I can't say that I like angst but it's romance/angst so I think I can live by. I just can't get away from Shiznat...shiznat stories are one of the reason why i'm on the net when i'm a busy person...gotta spear some time for the two.
Okay, I'm looking forward to that update of yours :D -grin-

i went back to read it from the first chapter and it still made my heart flutter (or twinge in pain). now i'm feeling all mushy. thank you for this story.

*scream* WOAR so much emotion T_T My heart melting right now...eww--you made my day! So happy now!

I never want it to end but every good things must have the ending point before its become boring. to bad I love your story, you're an amazing writer.
Oh can't wait for the new story, thank you for writing, sharing and come back. ^_^b