Woo! This is great so far. I've a question though... have you finished this story? 'Cause I'm wonderin' what's gonna happen next.
Heh, ya gotta like Taj's (for the most part) Devil-may-care attitude. Where'd you get the name "Taj" anyway? Brilliant choice. :P

Please update. This is a great story but you refuse to update, update update please

Haha it's so funny that Links forgets that him and Saria have a linked minds when they kiss and says that!

I pray that you didn't stop writing this Kaz... THIS IS GOOD! HOW DARE YOU WRITE A STORY LIKE THIS AND STOP WRITING WHEN IT STARTS TO TAKE OFF?

OMG... Please, please, please please! WRITE MORE! I do not want to sound like one of those whiney little kids, but you leave me NO choice. I swear, this is SUCH a good story, and I have been reading it through ALL of my spare time... now you just stop it? Oh. My. Gosh.

You're KILLING me. And I DON'T DIE! o.0

I do not beg for things, but I ask with much emotion, (you've got me pretty close to begging) for an update to this grand story.

Please write more! ~XT-421

Hey! This story rocks!
I hope you continue!

great story, althoguh its starting to dull out a little. Try spicing it up.

Hmm... not too bad. Some parts sound a bit corny. Mainly, though, I'm referring to areas where it says something like "Kokiri being unable to go anywhere." These lines could be rephrased a little bit. Regardless, I don't think that this is actually the case as in the ending of Ocarina of Time, the Kokiri were celebrated along with everyone else at Lon Lon Ranch. My theory is that they will "surely die" after an extended time, if they STAY out of the woods for an extended, they will "surely die" because they will begin to age, grow old, and die, but that's just me, and it's your fic.

Anyway, written well, but again, some areas sound kinda corny. Not too bad, though. What's "too bad" is that this fic hasn't been updated in a while. I'll try and continue reading it, anyway, though. I shall also add it to my Alert list in case you do update it, again.

Hmm... as for "Link and Saria, friends or more?" I personally liked that fic, along with "The Locket." Not perfect, no, but they were pretty nice. However, admittedly, I haven't read them in a while. Strangely, I just realized that "The Locket" isn't on my favorites list. I thought it was...

Whew, ugh, enough of that. I'll continue reading, later.

I love this story, are you still continuing it?

I was going through my email and found an old review reply from you for this story, so I decided to drop in and see where you're at now. It would appear that it's been going fairly well, since I was your third review and here you are fourteen updates and one hundred reviews later. I'll attempt to give you a fairly general review for all fifteen chapters to date, so this may get a tad long winded (a common occurrence when I'm reviewing). Also, bear in mind that I typically try to balance criticism with praise in my reviews, and I always try to be encouraging. So, I apologize in advance if there is any confusion in that regard.

Well, that aside, let's start off with the premise. As I believe I said in my previous review, the initial premise for this story has been done fairly often before. However, as I also said, there is nothing wrong with that so long as you forge your own story from it, which you've been doing admirably. Your locations have been interesting, I was a tad disappointed however, with the lack of details that would have made Soli city for instance stick out from other locations as a "technology" driven society as opposed to Hyrule with its magic.

Your minor plot twists to this point have been interesting thus far, and I'm interested to see which group (if any) turns out to be the true "bad guys". Not to mention that it still seems rather questionable whether or not taking the amulets back to Hyrule is a good idea. And we can still only guess exactly who’s pulling Taj’s strings.

Something that's left me rather confused is the absence of any explanation about Navi. Since this fic takes place after Link's search for her in Majora's Mask, it seems strange that the only times she is mentioned (chapters 4, 13 and 15 I believe) offer no explanation of her fate or even if Link is still searching for her, or has simply given up. I don't know if this is because she has a future role to play in the plot and you don't wish to foreshadow anything, or if it is simply something you overlooked.

Another issue I've had is that some of the changes in perspective are "abrupt" for lack of a better word. To explain: the story is following Link and then abruptly changes to Saria for a few lines, then back again without any indication of the change. This doesn't happen in all your scene changes, however I believe it occurred on at least one or two occasions.

Since Natsu1 seems to have gone on hiatus (not that I'm one to talk) this pairing has had what I consider to be one of its strongest pillars drop out from under it. Which is one of the reasons I hope you continue writing and improving this story, as somebody needs to "carry on the torch" so to speak.

Lastly, I suggest trying to read your story aloud to yourself when you make revisions. It's a trick that helps you catch a lot of errors you normally wouldn't notice. Feel free to reply if you have any questions about my comments/observations/incoherent ramblings, or just to tell me I talk too much when I review. (Believe it or not, this review was even longer before I trimmed it.)

Wow...I am stunned. I don't normally read LXS stuff, but I decided to read one and find out what the big deal was. This fic thus far has been really really good. I may not support the pairing but I am really loving this fic ^^. Why haven't you updated for a month? I really wanna find out what happens next! update soon pls!

I can't wait till the next chapter, this story is like a movie when i read it, your really good at this.

hey noice chapter. hope u update soon!

w00t! Unknown void of darkness!! lol plus the fiery Darunia...loved it! Awesome!! Keep it up!

1) Darunia's attack was awesome!
2) The Link and Saria scene was too good, mine suck XD
3) Malon likes Zelda now, cool!
4)Happyham...u suck, i hate ppl like u, cabrona, vete pal carajo!

tealeaves. two words?

nteresting…” Nori didn’t get time to inspect the stone anymore when a large net came swooping down over the both of them. touch akward

Resorting to their special crop I like how you didn't outright say bombs

his mysterious red eyes and rugged hairstyle were quite attractive to the ranch girl

kinda creepy

Oh dear, she doesn’t know it’s me, Zelda thought to herself. heheh

Uh no, I mean yes, no!” Link became flustered, he felt ashamed for doing that, even though he knew she didn’t mind as long as he didn’t sit there drooling mindlessly for hours. lol, i'm blushing on link's behalf.

I like how you go from the intense violent scenes to this.

I say blow it up!” Madi set herself on top of the cube clapping her hands insanely.
XD

“I say-” Link was cut off by Perri trotting over to them, pecking at the boy, he stole his hat and began chewing on it.

period instead of second comma

“It’s going to explode!” Madi squeaked while hiding under Link’s hat.

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