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| Teenager 2007-08-09 ch 1, | abusehaha, i |
| Kyuubi-Foxy-Girl 2007-05-12 ch 1, | abuseOkay, I'm implieing(sp) that SAskue is dead, Sakura is cring for his lost and comitted suicide. Naruto killed him, his regeting it, and Hinata is annoying him... at least, I think... |
| zany-chan 2007-04-22 ch 1, | abuseOh my gosh this is so sad! Sometimes I wish that stories were real...I love the story! |
| amanda thorn or tintin uchi... 2006-09-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseThe begining was great the misterius death. You must be a wold class writer.You must know how to think of great storys.What ever job you want would be luky your parents are luky! Im no prize like you are I think im a messup I am nice if you get to know me. sinserly, Tintin |
| Heart's Door 2006-09-22 ch 1, | abuseSasuke has died... .> Ehh... Your first fic... It was so sad, but so beautiful. *silent tears* |
| kerrance. 2006-08-11 ch 1, | abuseNice, and a little ooc. How was is SasuSaku? I suppose if you squint really hard... But it was still good. |
| pigs103 2006-04-15 ch 1, anon. | abusewho was it ? |
| Dawn Goes Down to Day. 2006-04-10 ch 1, | abusewow that was great and a catchy ending. i liked it |
| Essyllus 2006-04-04 ch 1, | abuseThe narrative was choppy at first, which made it confusing, but it's really good. I got gist after the first few lines, but it didn't make me want to stop reading. I really, really want to know how it came this way. I vote for an mult-chaptered prelude. Pretty please? |
| Arita Oak 2006-04-04 ch 1, | abuseI couldn't get what was going on at first, but i like the way it was written. Good title choice! |
| Uzamaki-Girl 2006-04-01 ch 1, | abuseThis was sad! But still ver good! T.T |
| dayof46 2006-03-31 ch 1, | abusethat's weird. not in a bad way, never heard anyone say i'm not ok i promise.. guess that's also the reason i read this... hm... if you do reply to your reviewers can you tell me if sasuke was actually killed in the real manga version? this was cute, and i wish it wasn't a one shot... now i'll have to make up my own ending, but still cute.. ^^ |