Uhm - so the second chapter is the latter part of the first chapter?

-K

Congratulations on a job well done...

I especially like - Rodney took this comment as a personal insult. “They’re no match for me! I’m brilliant! I could manipulate their little make-believe world like that,” he snaps his fingers on the last word, “and once I knew that, I didn’t see anyone or anything I didn’t want to see.” - you capture them all so well.

I said green wasn't my colour, but 'I' do seem to be a rather lovely shade of it at the moment.

Pst there's an Elizabeht at the start...

What fun! And Kate Heightmeyer having a bad dream about our boys, and not a naughty dream either. Marvelous wrap up and yes, they are a funky little family. Go team!

It seems to me (in a lot of the SGA fics I read) That Rodney gets the sympathy and John gets insulted when it comes to 'clearing the air and fixing the emotions' time. But maybe that's just me.

But the air has been cleared, and that's all that matters. Excellent fic. A little confusing in parts, but still excellent since it all gets cleared up eventually.

Teehee. I loved the last scene! Such great friendship. Just the idea of John seeing Rodney like his jumper! Such a great description of their friendship. You have a good point, like they hang out, they have fun (Oh I was rolling! "Was he being...dumped, in some strange, unromantic and asexual way?") but you don't see the good side of such a close friendship in the show, at least I can't think of any heartfelt moments right now... Sniffle, why don't show writers give us smarm?

I started reading this in the middle, like I was getting the story alerts but I hadn't finished your previous stories so I didn't want to read this one yet, but then for some reason around part 7 I just happened to open it and read the chapter and it was great so I kept reading each new chapter, not reviewing because I wanted to read the whole things so far first, but I never went back to the beginning! So I'm sure I have a very different perception (teehee) of the story than most readers. I mean the whole being stuck in some kind of squish came as a big surprise to me, I was kind of discovering it along with the guys. I really enjoyed it though, and once I go finish reading the last story I'll have to start at the beginning of this one and then I'll tell you all about how wonderful it all is. Keep on writing!

OK, I tried to review on the next chapter but well it wouldn't let me.
Rodney the Friday Night Fights specialist was great. Sheppard has a seriously disturbed mind. And, Hey! Lokas! is the best line so far! Lots of fun!

Had to catch up. What a crazy, mixed up world John creates. And, the Blob. Our little pineapple bits are finally free and Hey! Lokas! Is the best line.
Way to go Rodney--boy! Need to sign him up for Friday Night Fights!

John has the worst luck with imagination fueld devices. If he'd just learn to catch on sooner, I doubt he'd ever want to leave. At least Rodney got the hang of it for a bit of fun. About time someone did.

YAY! They're back together! I like the way that it was actually pessimist Rodney, with his logical mind, who pieced it together, while (usually) optimistic Sheppard wasn't able to get past his emotional responses. And yay for Teyla and Ronon, willing to risk it all to get their teammates back.

Absolutley Brillant! I loved it when John said, “Do you think you can come back later? I don’t want to be insane today. How’s tomorrow, noon-ish?” That was freakin hilarious! It reminded me a great deal of our truly missed Jack O'Neal in Stargate SG-1! Oh, and I'm hoping to see some more of that delicious Sheppard whumpage in future chapters! You are truly talented at dishing it out on our beloved Shep! Hee Hee! Keep up the great work, and please update soon! LOL!

Reality always does bite for John. Hooray for Rodney and his logical ways. They need to turn that squish into mush.

Ah, I love an insistant, unflappable Rodnney. :)

Ronon should just keep shooting that squish. Giant lumps of goo cannot be trusted. Sheppard and McKay are going to need major Heightmeyer sessions after this.

John can do it. He's the man. He may be a little insane at the moment, but when has mental instability ever stopped anyone?

good chapter! very exciting!! poor teyla, and john! come on john trust teyla!
cant wait to read more..please update soon!