Reviews for Harry Potter and the Hero's Path

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darkxangelx-xo 2008-08-20 ch 23,	abuseokay wkd so far im thinking that row will probably be taken for the 2nd task therefore forcing harry to actively compete?
St. John the Devil 2008-08-19 ch 23,	abuseI will be frank with you, I hate doing these reviews but you have numerous errors in word usage such as using he when you clearly meant she. In the last chapter, I counted no less than seven of these mistakes. About six from this chapter as well but a lot more from previous chapters. The plot is really good too but I am disappointed that you have not updated in a long while. If you continued this story on another site, please let me know. -John
Matt 2008-08-17 ch 21, anon.	abuseFantastic story, I read it two years ago when I first entered the HP fandom, rereading it now and seeing that the quality hasn't diminished one bit, this has to be one of my most favorite Harry Potter fanfictions right along with The Denarian Series. I truly wish you would come back and finish it or at least write a note on your bio page to tell everyone you're alright and have no plans on continuing this story, you're an absolute fantastic writer. This story holds SO much potential. I look forward to hearing from you in the future.
jjack0310 2008-08-11 ch 23,	abuseone of the best stories on abandoned. I absolutely love this story, and just hope that you continue it again, or atleast put a note on your profile letting know that you have no such plans thnx
aka.thenewguy 2008-08-08 ch 23,	abuseBLOODY WICKED STORY! Full marks mate. This is top notch. I love it and I can't wait to see more!
ReganBaxter 2008-08-07 ch 1,	abuseGood
iamtherealmaverick 2008-08-07 ch 23,	abuseDude,this is fantastic! I noticed that it's been several years since your last update...I hope you haven't abandoned this fic - it would be a real crime. Please post again soon. ~M
she who is frustrated 2008-08-04 ch 23, anon.	abuseit has been so long. could you please update this story, it is so god to be on hiatus/abanded status. please update i would like to know the rest of the story.
Dragonanzar 2008-08-04 ch 23,	abusei'm really enjoying this story! powerful independant harry rox! by the way, are you still updating on this site, or have you moved the story to another? please don't tell me you've abandoned it! it's just that i've noticed you haven't updated for over a year. please reply!
Midori Heiwa 2008-08-02 ch 21,	abusehi. i was wondering when is chapter 24 going up, it has been around 2 years i would love to see the ending to this storie. so please update. i sure other also feel the same. please note this is for chapter 23 as i have already left a note there. please dont leave it hanging, i want to see the end. i really like this book.
bluefynx 2008-08-01 ch 23,	abuseAwesome story, I can't wait to read more about the world you've imagined for the Harry Potter verse.
Unseen Moon 2008-08-01 ch 23,	abuseinteresting
High Lord Petrakon III 2008-07-29 ch 23,	abusegood story, just hope it gets updated.
Legilimens31 2008-07-18 ch 21,	abuseI don't even want to know how much time I spent reading this chapter, or this story for that matter. Your descriptive details of the unforgivables are brilliant and way better than canon. For a second I thought that Harry wasn't going to be able to completely throw off the Imperius curse like in the novel, so I was pleasantly surprised when he did. With all of his self training in mind control and Legilimency, it makes sense. The Animagus training with Sirius is great; I would have loved to have a teacher like him when I was in high school. Daphne is a con artist and I'm curious to see exactly what she has up her sleeve. All that being said, I really hope that you'll eventually decide to finish this story. It is far too well-written and original to simply be abandoned.
Legilimens31 2008-07-17 ch 16,	abuseWow this was a long chapter! I loved the Quidditch in it. Even though this story is obviously AU, a lot of things seem like they could be canon. For example, it makes sense that Ron and Hermione wouldn't have became friends in their first year if it wasn't for Harry and the troll incident. Ron has been such a git so far that its funny. Your characterization of other characters like Percy is dead on too.

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