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Reviews for: Fearful Loyalty
bella1919
2008-02-23 . chapter 2
please update this cause I think that it is a great fic just what I was looking for. PLEASE UPDATE!
Monisha Ayita
2007-05-11 . chapter 2
Really likeing it (still). But again, it felt rushed. That whole battle scene could have taken been much more powerful. I'm just sayin.
However, I like the plot. Alternate Universe is always fun, isn't it?
Hey, read mine now, thanks! :)
Monisha Ayita
2007-05-11 . chapter 1
kk... I liked the idea. Really, really good!
I think that it's a little raw, however.
I felt like the part where Hermione learns about her parents is very unemotional and rushed. And how dis Harry find out about his evil sister? Something to look into. Also: will Draco play into this? That would be wicked.
Anywhoo, I'm liking it so far. Onto the next chaper.
Much love, Exume.
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