awesome

Oh. wow. I thought that was Ginny narrating. Not lily. I don't even pay attention to the names. I was so wrapped up in the plot slash story. Realy great by the way.

I can't believe I'm just now reviewing this. It's been sitting around on my favs list for like a year. Wow. That's really sad. Okay, I'm done now.

~Lugian

If you don't know who this is, I'm going to punch you. Seriously. Don't doubt it for a second.

it's really good. you can really feel the emotion and stuff.

sam x

I loved that. It was pretty sad at first, but I'm happy it turned out to be quite a happy ending, because she's going back to James. =]

What took her so bloody long...I would'nt have thought twice.
So sweet.
Cheers.
M.

That was beautifully amazing. Great job!

For a horrifying second I thought she was living her life as this happened...then I realized she was visualizing it. Good..lol. This was amazingly well written, very touching, very tragic. Now I have to go finish reading your other stories..

I

Oh my God,that was so touching. Very tragically beautiful. I loved it.

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i adore it- from the 'Strawberry Fields' line to the subtle ending. excellent job!

-nao

great, just great but i reckon you need tomake it clearer in the story that lils isleaving amos and going to james instead of putting as an authors note but the way you have it matches up with the story.

that was wonderful. the ending was a little comfusing but you have wonderful talent for writing.

AH! I LOVE IT!! I love all the storys you write (espesialy the pointless comericals) I pretty much just gave myself away... ohh well

no more fairly odd parents storys for me!!

I'm on to naruto. even tho its my first day with my new acount i wrote a short story!! yay! stupid three day wait thingy

ok bye now.

^-^

I was confused at first but now I get it. Very nice, I'm glad she went to James in the end.