Yeah it's been like 3 years, but I just read this fic and I love it. Hope you finish it someday!

Convicts...? Now I'm worried...

Aw! Poor Aiden! The gun thing was sweet though.I like how you've worked bits of the manga into this but kept it original. Keep it up!

Aw...That was so sad! *cries* Poor Aiden!

That was a really good chapter! I liked the conversation between Roy and Aiden. The sandwich was funny! You need to update soon again!

I love this so far! More please!:

That chapter was so sad, I almost cried because of the last two sections. Update soon.

Wow! That was sad. I liked it though. Please update soon. Cya.

Why did Aiden have to die? Oh and I loved that part with the gun! The promise that Riza made to him, and she kept it, too! It was sad but beautiful! Laters!

Glad you updated it! XD

Hmm...this is interesting. I like it. I would like some more please. Cya.

OMG! This chapter was really good! I like the way you added ch. 58 into it. I guess the only thing I can comment on that needs a bit o' fixing is to check before you upload it for mushed words. There aren't too many though. Anyway, UPDATE SOON!

-Fullmetalfan

p.s.- I like the quote at the beginning! Roy said that in the last episode, didn't he? Hehehe, I love FMA...

Hey, I love the start of your story so far! I really like this alternative story with the characters and your writing style. It's cool because you kept their original personalities and stuff. Anyway, keep up the good work!

-Fullmetalfan

omg chapter 58 was great! I liked this chapter. It added a twist.

Story line is getting better an better can't wait to see who dies.

I like the character Aiden he's cool. Waiting for update story nis amazing.