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| fakeaway6200 2007-11-22 ch 3,  | abuseYou made Itachi too nice and you made everything seem too easy.That's all I have to say. |
| Ribbon-chan03 2007-06-18 ch 4, | abuse...*sniffles* it made me cry...excellent fic, though! |
| SasuHinaPassion 2007-02-26 ch 2, | abuseomg this is so sad!! i love the drama! |
| SpasticMonkey 2006-10-24 ch 4, anon. | abuseAww. THis is so sad but also SO sweet! I'm looking forward to your future fics(ItaHina hopefullyXD)!! Though it'd be great if they will be a bit less... sad. ROCK ON!XD |
| Rewy 2006-09-26 ch 4, | abuseGreat, you just made a girl cry... Lovely fanfic.. *Sniif* |
| KagomeMarie 2006-09-02 ch 4, | abuseaw T_T *sobs* thats sad n.n; |
| KagomeMarie 2006-09-02 ch 3, | abuseYES!! she got serious muhahahaha!! |
| KagomeMarie 2006-09-02 ch 2, | abuseaw poor naruto |
| Bacontheft 2006-05-18 ch 4, | abuseaw! so sad! itachi, hinata, and sasuke are my favorite characters! hiashi was ooc, but i guess you cant blame him, his daughter DID die after all! |
| lily 2006-05-13 ch 4, anon. | abuseBeautiful and well written. It was very sad and made me cry (I'm not ashamed of it) a great way to end it. Most Fan-fiction ends predictabaly but this one had a deppresing ending its unique and great. ^.^ |
| Itami Yatake 2006-05-13 ch 4, | abuseIs this story really over? It doesn't say it's completed. It's sad how everybody died in the end (If I was there, I would of said something nice about Itachi...maybe that he was probaly a good kid for the first ten years of his life...) If you're continuing, please tell me! It's really emotional, actually. I sort of exspected everyone to jump out of the trees, saying,"Ha ha! April fools day!" Then someone says it's december... |
| Harpygirl91 2006-05-12 ch 4, | abuse;_; depressing but very well written! |
| AngelicCrossplay 2006-05-10 ch 3, | abuseLike the story so far, very dramatic, but good. Please update soon! |
| thunder sister 2006-04-30 ch 3, | abuseOnce again: Whoa... I didn't give you anything constructive did I? And I said i would too... What a horrible person am i... Ah! I got it! Please update! That'll be my critisism! Now go! Update! :D |
| Nanen 2006-04-25 ch 3, | abuseExelent plot. I would mention the shortness of chapter 3, but its bigger than my first two chapters together... Meh, Keep the story going please! |