nice job, it was neat ^^ and very touching ^^

Very sweet!

How sad, thank goodness he at least learned the value of comforting them. Very well written

I'm truly amazed at how well you captured Ayame in his silent moments of contemplation. Great job, and I hope you do something of a continuation.

I really hope that you continue this fic. It'd be good to see where this will go...

I love it! Poor Aya, he's always wanted to love Yuki as he should, but Yuki won't let him. I think Aya would do something like that. Thankies for putting this piece of art up on this site! *^_^*

that was really good. I really liked it. I started reading and literally couldn't stop (a bit glad it's not a long story or else I'd be glued to the computer longer than normal!!). Ayame and Kyo are my two favourite characters and it's nice to see a fanfic where they're together but not *together*

*gives two thumbs up* excellant!

Very sweet! I especially like the part with Ayame and Mine. Well done!

so cute, i havn't seen many stories where ayame isn't acting all childish and stuff. Very well writen also.

That is a very cute story. I like to see how Ayame changed with time and this story is a good example to show that.

Ooh. Really good. I liked all the references to other juunishi and the way you wrote Aya. I love him to itty bitty bits but it seems like people gloss over hi uncaring side a lot, and it was nice (painful) to see it. Especially with the comfort buffer of him holding Kyo. Which, by the way, was very cute.