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| SakuraAndShaoranFreak 2008-07-11 ch 15,  | abusePlease...you HAVE to post more!I am OBSESSED with this story so you have to post more now! |
| Lmae 2008-03-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseI only have one remark... you made Fen to obessive about his new religion for his won damn good... I'm a Christian... and we don't act like that... ^ maybe youre not christian, maybe youre catholic. I am a Christian and I act like that. |
| Musette Fujiwara 2007-12-23 ch 17, | abuseOh My God... this story is brutal... I only have one remark... you made Fen to obessive about his new religion for his won damn good... I'm a Christian... and we don't act like that... I loved your story, so I guess from this chapter on till the end... Sakura will belong to Fen and will fight Syaoran demon side for her survival... I guess she no longer loves him... and Syaoran forgot about his love for her... Even though he felt a tug in his heart when seeing her crying but that won't change the fact that he wasnts to kill her... I can't wait to see how you'll end it... |
| Light in the Darkness 2007-10-12 ch 17, | abuseo very inspirational message. I really liked the bible verse you used in this chapter ^^ o I wonder what's gonna happen between Sakura and Syaoran now! >.< Please udpate soon! |
| breathlessnightxx 2007-10-06 ch 17, | abuseDamnit stop making Li evil! I can't STAND him being like that to Sakura! Lol but it's a good story line so far so please update soon!! |
| digi-gal-rox 2007-10-02 ch 17, | abusethis is an interesting fic. i just have a few criticisms, and i hope that u don't take them to harshly. now, i already know that you stated that english is not ur first language, but that isn't the problem. the actual problem is the japanese and chinese words you are using. they are spelt incorrectly. i am chinese, and i've also studied japanese, and i've noticed through out your fic that some of the words are spelt incorrectly. follow da.cheese.cake. find an online dictonary that can help translate the words for u. other than that, i enjoyed your story, and looking forward to the next part. |
| cherrysakurawolf 2007-10-02 ch 17, | abuseplease update!! i love it by the way! |
| CDC2 2007-10-02 ch 2, anon. | abuseLMAO! He is hopeless... |
| da.cheese.cake 2007-10-02 ch 1, | abuselooking forward to the next chapters, however, just wanted to say that 'thank you' in chinese is not spelt Hsie Hsie, but spelled 'xie xie'. and for 'sorry' in jap, its gomen ne, not gomen neh. my advice is to find an online translator for these words, i know that the online mainly relies on character, but it's still best if you try and find the correct spelling for the words. |
| shadow 2007-10-02 ch 16, anon. | abusegreat another Christianity fan-fic, the first half of the story is great until u bring jesus. Now its all sorcerer being sinners, even though i have some Christian friends that don't blabbing around about their religion. I mean come on the bible was created by us human not god so i wander y the bible so holy. I respect the some of the Christian belief but not all like magic is a sin come on its what u do with magic is depended and not to mention the anti-gay marriage how is it a sin when 2 same sex love each others so deeply its like the 1950's again, especially fred phelps which by the way is a donkey. so yea ur story is good til the Christian part |
| Irui 2007-10-02 ch 17, | abuseI love this story; it's thrilling, with suspense and a tint of horror. (never saw Syao so evil XD) NO! she should've brought the Bible! =( Gosh, the "deal" he made with the "devil" is so...cruel...he really did lose all his love for her (well most of it) since his "heart" ached when he saw her crying. GO KURA! i hope you upadte this soon! ~Irui |
| ChanChanandMosasi 2007-10-02 ch 17, | abuseI take it back :D I am uploading again ^^ its updated :D |
| cherrysakurawolf 2007-09-21 ch 16, | abusePLEASE UPDATE SOON!! SIGE NA!! PLEASE! |
| krisS 2007-06-23 ch 1, anon. | abusethe whole posted chaps are very very very good!four thumbs up(kasali ang hinlalaki ko sa paa..hehehe)si sakura ba ay Christian na rin,katulad ni fen?.. nakakaawa talaga sina syaoran at sakura.. because of syaoran's desire na makabalik kay sakura, ayun...huhuhu!..ur really a great writer te chette!..God bless!(*_*) |
| Khanh(Kathy) 2006-09-10 ch 16, anon. | abuseIt's really good. Syaoran so evil. ^^ Better made Sakura with Fen . Or maybe let her dead (sorry) Anyway,please update soon |