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20eKUraN09
2009-12-04 . chapter 20
Whoa... Didn't almost noticed that it was already a year since you last updated... I really like this story as well as the prequel that I am rereading this again (I suddenly had a craving to read all my fav stories especially the best ones)... Your plot is really amazing and the way the story goes keeps your readers sitting tightly on their chairs while holding their breaths for the next events to come... And I totally salute you for having such creative mind... All in all, I guess the main point is please update soon... Though I can wait patiently too.. As long as I can see how this story will unfold in front of my eyes...


And oh... I really love what Duo did to the Dudleys'... KUKUKU.. Totally wicked... ^_~ Don't know if I already said that but who cares.. Hehehehe...
Reni
2009-11-26 . chapter 1
Please, please, PLEASE update! I miss this story, which is completely and totally amazing and awesome. My and my two best friends rotated reading chapters aloud to each other, 'cause it was one of our favorite stories, your stories are so good! So, please, update or brainstorm, but don't let this series die, because it's really good and deserves better then that. If you really need ideas, ask your fans. I promise, you'd receive tons of input. Stay alive, and keep this series going, please!
Stars-Eclipsed
2009-11-13 . chapter 20
So I love this story and its prequel. It would be soo great to see an update. Everyones really in character, any character changes have been shown as a process, not some sudden crazy change, and the plots really interesting. I hope this hasn't died, b/c its really good.
Swing-21
2009-11-13 . chapter 20
Awesome stories, I've read both in almost one setting (took me three whole days). Made me laugh a lot XD

Also, just a tiny thing I noticed this chapter: when McGonagall asks Duo if he knows who the culprit is, Duo says no, but it's a lie. I think you can rephrase that answer so he just omits to answer, like you manage to do usually. That excepted, good story! I'll wait impatiently for next chapter!
Lady Mazikeen
2009-10-15 . chapter 20
O: It has been a year since you updated, and I've only just now realized that I haven't reviewed this chapter. Something is very wrong. I'm sorry! TT.TT I thought I had.
Anywho... I'm pretty sure your vacation didn't last a year. Are you still alive and kicking? 0 o0 Cause I would feel incredibly horrible if you weren't.
Um! I hope you're doing okay and you mebbeh get around to updating sometimeish. I don't want to pester you or anything but... here I am. Pestering you. I am a horrible person. But that's okay! I think. <<; I should stop talking now.
Continuing on to what I actually pulled up the window to talk about; I am very curious as to what Blaise and Draco are talking about. @ w@ Also, I had more to say but I've gone and forgotten. Ah well. Hope to read more soon~~
-usagi018-
2009-10-10 . chapter 20
wah! Please continue!! I don't if it's been a year it's a crime if you don't finish this much of a good story!! awesome even!! wah! please don't discontinue! I'll be waiting! bye!
Serenity Moon2
2009-09-27 . chapter 20
This is a beautiful sequal so far, I'm loving it. I wonder whats in the puzzle box that Duo got. And I'm glad you put in how Quatre was doing with taking care of the Willow. And one thing I can't help but imagine when Zechs told Duo about the granades...I just can't but imagine for the demonstration of those in class, having Duo there to demonstrate them, having him just standing there...pulling the pin...and lazily, but with an evil smirk on his face as he throws it over his shoulder.
Sivy
2009-09-16 . chapter 20
Saw your review on "Cold Iron" figured your alive enough for me to bother you about updating... *poke poke* we need to keep GW alive in any way possible!
Hikaru Kosuzaku
2009-09-11 . chapter 20
I hate being annoying by pointing this out, but you haven't updated in over a year. Some of us are waiting rather impatiently because your fic is just that good. Please don't have us all choke on our impatience!
Bloody Winged
2009-08-26 . chapter 20
OMG! This ff has to be one of the best I've ever read! *-* I just read this one (and the prequel) these last few days and... DAMN! I even got a friend of mine who *hates* Gundam Wing (she is the opposite as me there XD) to admit that this ff is pure genius from the snippets that I showed her. It's just... *-* I can't even *describe* how good it is. I love how good you keep the characters IC, I love how you spin a damn good plot with humor and some romance, how you manage to just let the words floot and one can't even stop to read! Damn... I really think I love you for writing this ff. I still can't believe I finished what's out so far and I can't wait to read more! You just *have* to continue this ff. Please PLEASE tell me that you'll finish it. I'll cry otherwise. And I mean this. I can't imagine to *not* read this ff to the end. Hell, I'm not even a Harry/Draco fan and I just love how you write them! (I pity Draco btw most of the time - the rest of the time I'm laughing my ** off at him XD). I love how you let the guys learn and not just magically know it all, I love how you put Zechs into the story, I love their interactions... Oh, and I *definitely* love that you put them all in different houses. While it makes it harder for them, it's just plain *fitting* :D I really can't wait to read more. Please tell me you'll finish this ff, ok? *makes big puppy eyes*
Thanks for sharing this piece of absolute genius :D ^_^
foxxy nine-tails
2009-08-15 . chapter 20
love the story and hope u have time to update it soon
Tsukino Akume
2009-08-14 . chapter 20
This is such a fantastic story. I've fallen out of my chair laughing, bounced in anticipation, and gasped aloud. It's well-written and engaging, and has a plot that despite what you'd worried over, is completely original. There are other Gundam Wing/Harry Potter crossovers I've found, but yours is by far the best and most imaginative. I've noticed you're trying not to make characters from either side of the crossover *too* much more important than anyone else. Harry is still important, the Purebloods and Muggles *both* share information neither side knows, but the Gundam pilots can still more than hold their own, as they always can. Neither side is weaker than the other, and that just makes it all the more fantastic.
I want more of this so much! I want to know who the other Heirs are. For some reason, I have a sneaking suspicion Quatre is Hufflepuff's (and I'd *LOVE* to see Draco's reaction to that), but I'm hesitant on Ravenclaw. Mandy Brocklehurst comes to mind, with Wufei as a good second. The confusion behind the heirs and what they were *really* like is such a wonderful take, and I'd love to know more about them. Orie is both fascinating and annoying, but in a good way because I'm emphasizing with the characters. I'm anxious to see what happens with Scrimgeour, and what Hufflepuff's Hall and Griffindor's Room are like. There's so much more about this 'verse you've created that I want to know!
I sincerely hope that this story isn't abandoned, because I think it would be a great loss to your readers if it was. In the meantime, I hope the traumas of everyday life haven't killed you yet, and that you're surviving. And with luck, finishing this story one day so we don't all go mad! ^_~
And if it finished, thank you for writing it. Even if I'm frustrated that I'll never see the end, it's been a lovely trip to imagine all this. Best wishes!
mokahi
2009-08-10 . chapter 20
I've thoroughly enjoyed your story so far. I've spent the last several days reading it every chance I get. I love your melding of the worlds and the way you've created logical niches for so many of the characters that further entwine them.
DS
2009-08-10 . chapter 20
Oiy! You've been gone almost a year. Surely Vegas isn't /that/ wonderful?

Please don't discontinue this.

DS
Katerina Shinigami
2009-07-28 . chapter 19
So I know I dropped a note a bit back... but I'm dropping another one in hopes that sending badgers your way will help inspire you to write more. I have my own personal badger and she helps me a lot... So here's a badger: please write more. This is the best HP/GW fic I've read and I absolutely adore it. I learned it will only let me drop one review a chapter so hopefully I won't run out of chapters to drop reviews on before you write more. :) Much love!

-- Shi-chan
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