you should totally finish this story you were doing good on it and i think you should bring in Logan,Colin, and Finn in it and have Lori and Logan get together

i think u shud bring the the limo boys in, they cud b tristen's friends, but anyways PLEASE UPDATE SOONN!

i love the stroy

I like it.

Update soon

you relize you have rory and lori have the same name only differnt nick names which i think is kinda bad cuz twins usually have DIFFERENT NAMES not Lorelai for both of them just thoght you should know

Why cant you make them Tristans room mates and a love interest for Lori?

watever you do don't break up tristan and rory..I like it

cool

I like it alot, but I wished lori was the one with her father and not lorelai because lorelai and rory are suppose to be connected. please update soon.

Hey. Great Story. I love the idea but it is a little weird how Lori lived with Lorelai and Rory with Christoper. It would make more sense to have Rory grow up as normal and Lori live with Chris. I was also disappointed with Emily and Richard's reactions. It had so much potential! Any way, I really did enjoy it so update soon!

yes do bring the in ecspecialy finn

You HAVE HAVE HAVE to bring in Logan, colin and Finn. espesially finn.

cool idea kinda partent trap

love it

This is a really great idea, and I'm really into this story. The only thing I don't get is why everyone wasn't happier to see each other when they met back up after 12 years. The way it was written, it seemed like they had seen each other every day for the past 12 years instead. But it's a really really great story. Continue soon!

-Stella