This was amazing, please write the next chapter soon!

what does she want to tell him?

you should hurry and make some more

What what what? what is it?

wait, what was he trying to apoligize for? and what is raven gonna show him? please continue!

:p

hello just to tell you that is not really my email.ok well i liked it and you leave readers on a cliff saying what happens next?i like that.

Is there gonna be another chapter? Love it.

hey keep writing i want to keep reading what happens next? please tell me

Yeah, I know so is the next chapter. Sorry! I'm trying to post as many chapters up as I can before camp! Thanks for r&r!

Wonderful start! Raven kissing BB first is a huge surprise!

Keep the good writing.

Hrm...nice.

A little rushed, but nice.