Telepathy seems like something that could be VERY distracting lol

Ohh, what a beautiful story, with a little bit of everything! Nice job.

Aww, I love that story.

This is a great story! I love it - full of passion, longing, sweetness...and it's really well-written as well. PLEASE write more - I'm in the UK so I won't get to see next week's last episode of Voyager for ages, but I'm betting there's no J/C in it. Sigh. Still, if these kind of stories are the only J/C - as they should be - we're ever going to get from now on, that's okay with me. Keep writing!