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bayre 2008-05-04 ch 1,	abuseTis great! I liked...a lot!
PurpleBlaze 2008-02-19 ch 1,	abuseI haven't seen hell house, but I want to see Sam smile so I'll watch that one online tonight. Your visuals in this story really flowed. The sentences didn't run awkwardly.
bb1028 2008-01-15 ch 1,	abuseOk, completely random... but i just stumbled upon this, and.. I loved it :) this was seriously a perfect brother scene, could picture it in my head and everything, and just simply loved the conversation they had.. not to mention picturing them fighting in the mud was perfect too :) So yeah, dont mind me reviewing your story that's almost two years old lol :P ..just wanted to let ya know I liked it! beth :)
Dragonflysoul 2006-07-12 ch 1,	abusesniff There was all the laughing in the other stories and then-this. I wasn't expecting so much realism. You popped my cloud. lol But you did it beautifully. Don't worry--I've hid in bathrooms too. lol
HoofsTails Gal 2006-05-03 ch 1,	abuseNice story! It's very realistic and in character for the both of them. Might I add that it wasn't nearly as heart wrenching as I thought it might have been. Not that that's a bad thing! Not at all. It's kinda in between. Very Nice job! Tah HoofsTails Gal
AquarianNightSky 2006-05-01 ch 1,	abuseGood story. Unfortunately I missed the pec flex. I saw the episode but I missed that. I'll have to find a way to see it again. I died laughing @ the superglue part though.
wild wolf free17 2006-04-13 ch 1,	abuseWell done.
Burton Holderness 2006-04-04 ch 1, anon.	abuseAs per usual your story RULED!! You are so talented. I loved this beautiful psycological piece. That being said I still want a sequel to your first 2 stories, that had me rolling on the floor laughing. By the way you are completly right about Hell House it was FANTASTIC. Yeah I watched GG and when Padalecki smiles it is something else. I always wanted to smack Rory for dumping him. Also he totally flexed his pecks I know this, because I have tivo, and have rewatched that scene about 100 times. Good lord that boys built. Now all we need is both of them shirtless, and I can die happy. Can't wait for Thursday. Keep writing. Burton
Evergreene 2006-04-03 ch 1,	abuseThat that story is a quite an accomplishment considering that it was written in the bathroom at work, hehe! Love the angst, and the humour as well. I can't wait to see Hell House, but I'm stuck down here in Australia where we've only just seen Scarecrow. growls Now you've got me all impatient!
Tezpin 2006-04-03 ch 1,	abuseFantastic story again - how do you do it?! I'm in awe... You've got their characters pegged so well, I could really see this as a scene in one of the episodes. And while I know it was a serious moment for them, there is something about those two rolling around in the mud that just brings a smile to my face. grin The way Oz tv is going at the moment it is going to be Christmas before I get to see the infamous flex... sigh Thank god for an imagination!
thelibrarian01 2006-04-02 ch 1,	abuseWow - definitely not a mess. I found myself holding my breath by the end of the story. So much angst for these poor boys. I do love humor, but somehow the angst seems to work so much better for them. :-) I also finished reading Bedeviling the Chipper late last week; fantastic job there too. Keep up the good work! P.S. It's not just you - there was some definite chest flexing going on. :-)
rozzy07 2006-04-02 ch 1,	abuseYou summed up the differences between the 2 brothers perfectly here. Loved it, just wished I could have seen the mud fight for real and the subsquent shower scene to follow!! Perhaps a follow up is needed - if just to show of those marvelous twitching pecs again!
pmsdevil01 2006-04-02 ch 1,	abusei noticed that shower thing too! i agree i was blown away by that episode it was awesome and sam smiling like that was great i've never watched gilmore girls either. the super glue scene was funny as hell i loved the entire episode i'm obsessed with the show. lol. great story!
DancinThroughLife 2006-04-01 ch 1,	abusereally cute story...i liked it alot!! i saw the flex too! omg i was sitting there just lmao...dean, you would think, would be the first one to do it...but sam beat him to it! ::e-props to you!:: SOS
Kaewi 2006-04-01 ch 1,	abuseHaha, I guess you can find inspiration to write anywhere. And bathroom stalls are about as private as you can get! You are truly the master of brother fight scenes. You really are. Not to mention the emotion behind the story. You are unmatched when it comes to psychologically analysing these guys. Dean's fears fit perfectly with his character-- and Sam's reaction and need for a confession did too. The mud part was really hilarious, but it made it even better that neither of them found it remotely funny. And yes, Hell House was AWESOME! When he laughed really hard, my heart melted. All the jokes and pranks were hilarious, and yet there was Sam angst in there too! (I saw the flex too, I thought it was just me!)

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