Really good! Loved it, but the title's wrong, it should be The Snitched Whiskey's Story. And I loved the way you used Peter, he's my favorite characther.

OK,I have read this one now. There are two things I reacted on.

No. 1 - When you quote in a quote (for example a character quote somebody) you have a single "quote-sign" - example "It stands 'a little house' on the paper". BUT If you're writing in Brittish english, you may use a ['] for a quote and a ["] for a quote in the quote. Yep, it's true, go and check out here - http://sv. Even, though, that is not very important.

No. 2 - One time you spelled Lily with as double L.

I felt this story is a little hurried?

an interesting story, i like the idea of james & sirius finding the room of requirement.

hahah how cute. I love stories with the marauders in them. Especially James/Lily fics. But remember that Lily was a very studious person and from what we know for the most part obeyed rules..so you might have wanted to add in a bit about how James made her come or something. But all the same this was such a sweet and funny one-shot. I like your writing style.
-quidditch7