That was sufficiently creepy. I didn't understand what was going on until I read the reviews though. I suck at poetry, even though I write it myself. lol. Some very nice images and lines. My favourite is: Her silent and emotionless red eyes burnt like the blazing fury that she commanded. Awesome. Other than a few odd contradictions, a very solid piece.

I love this, it's very powerful and beautifully written. Lulu is definitely an awesome character and one of my favorites. The ending was perfect although I let out a little giggle because my goofy little puppy's name is Lulu Shen but we just call her Lulu so I always get the image of my dog in my head whenever I read the name Lulu.

But anyway, very gorgeous (all I can think of is how beautiful it was, I really just got chills while reading) and I hope you write more one-shots like this!

Much love,

Scrunchii

This is an exquisite and terrifying poem. I was pondering writing an AU in which Yuna said "yes". I don't know if I can now: you have captured perfectly what would have happened in searing, blunt poetry that does more justice to her than all my scribbles combined.

That was awesome! =O

that was the most amazing and best written story/fic i have ever read! i haven't beaten the game yet, but lulu is by far my favorite character. she is the coolest person in the game. she has a dark past, she's powerful, she's beautiful, and she deserves the utmost respect. great job! i love it!

~Gypsy~

:-O

that was incredible. it read with an almost biblical prophecy feel to it, which was very cool. through the whole thing, i could see her becoming the fayth of the final summoning, too. which was also cool.

this was so incredible! fantastic work!