i luv it!

nice one shot! :) i havent read the actual story yet, should read that eh? this was really good. keep up the good work!

Aww... that was cute.

Nice...I mean it...this story...I read the previous one,the ugly duckling-that one was great...

aww. i enjoyed that very much.

Cute I can't believe that I just now read it though, my bad. You writing has improved alot. The swans were cute, that was a good idea to have Seto & Serenity make them, made it all the cuter.

-GOD Ara

Hey
Love your FF
Greets Femke from Holland XD

Aww. That's a cute one-shot. Fantastic job. It's so romantic!

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OMG this is so cute! I love it! Hey I updated Wolf-Woman I hope you read it soon!
~hiei-chan~

Very sweet. The swans at the end were a bit too corny, but that's just my opinion. Two thumbs up!

-Squeals madly- AW! THAT WAS SO CUTE! I LOVED IT! -Grins manically-

Dude! loved it, the oragami swan was genius!

aw that was so sweet i liked it so whats next to work on now that this fic is finished?

aw...such a cute sequel. i really liked it.