Well, this story needs to be edited before I read it, because there are Spanish (I believe that's the language) markings in the story everywhere making hard to follow as well. Also, I don't think I'll be reading 'When Harry left Severus' because it is a / fic, and I don't care for /. The stories are probably very good, as I enjoyed all your others, but I won't be reading the / fic and it is a bit anoying to read this story when it is not fully translated into English, sorry.

I love this story, I really want to see more of this Snape. I like the nuances and the friendships he has with Albus and Hagrid. I look forward to more.

OH MY GOD WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN

Yeah! I'm so happy to read something new from you! I loved it! Will you write more of your other stories, too? I really hope so!

Glad to see a new story after such a long time. write more. Finisih Summer Lessons. Please.

this was very cute
a bit different from your previous stuff -but I (like many others) are thrilled to see that you are writing again!! YAY!

I admit my fascination with your stories lies inherently in the AD-SS H/C dynamic which is not so blatent here. I hope you will continue writing either with a sequel to summer lessons which remains open...or perhaps a new story. I sense (forgive me, if it is incorrectly) that you enjoy writing the de-canonization of snape's character. what i mean is that you like others' discovering he's not a bastard (the HP, HG, RW trio in this story). I love the way you do it too.

But I can't help but want SS in AD's bed with Jeffrey at his side and a bit of James directed therapy for a voldemort assault in your future work. One can hope.

My favorite part of this one, incidentally was SS's almost paternal reaction to the jabberwock, as in, You daft, daft creature! Let me get it out for you!...so cute!!
Adorable...

The truth is I was too lazy to log in. I was told that you had a new story and I had to read it. I think it highly appropriate that such a vicious creature as a Jabberwock (You forgot about the flaming eyes) would be attracted to someone like Professor Snape. Yes, they are vicious. Ask any uffish thinker. (w.

Also I liked the story. And the cranberry scones.

Don't you know what is wrong with the typing? I don't think it's your fault, but I really can't read it like this. It's too disturbing... )-: By the way I really like those two doctors of yours - and just seeing at least three other authors borrowed them, I can't be the only one. Planning anything new with them? I have enjoyed all except of that slash fic (I don't like male-male interactions and R.L.,S.B. a S.S. in one bed doing you-know-what was to much for me). O.K. S.S. is definitely OOC in the most of them but I like his interactions with both the healers and A.D. (-:

This story was great. I've read most of your fics, and i love the interactions between Dumbledore and Snape.

That being said, is there any chance that you will be continuing with Summer Lessons. That was the first fic i ever read of yours, and then went back and started from the begining. It would be nice if it was finished, as it's like getting 3/4 of the way through a great book and then finding the rest of the pages blank.

I really hope you will continue that story, but if not, i'll be looking out for new stories from you.

Here's hoping.

OK, at first I wasn't sure that this was the same writer I've loved as 'Raven Dancer' in the past, particularly given the aforementioned punctuation problems and the fact that it was published on 'April Fool's Day'. Also, the style seemed off, particularly in the first chapter. But by the end of the third I was as engrossed as ever! I have to admit, I prefer your 'Snape' to Rowling's any day of the week, and that's saying something!

Thank you for writing this, and PLEASE keep it up!

Nice to have you back. Enjoyed this story.

Great to see you posting and writing here again. :)

Enjoyed the story - quite amusing. Hagrid, Snape and Dumbledore have to be my favourite trio.

How delightful to see you writing again after all this time. The problems with quotation marks is a bit distracting and sadly, after two chapters, I just had to stop.

Your idea has me very curious about where you are going with this.

This was just WONDERFUL!

Glad to see something from you again - it's been a long time since you've written. I didn't discover your other stories until a while after you had written them - but quite enjoyed them.

This was especially nice with a chance to blend in the Jabberwocky. And everyone in nice character (I DO believe that Snape is not always nasty - we had previously seen hints that as long as someone is competent, he can be nice to them - Hagrid seemed to me to be one of those he was okay with, along with Minerva and Filch - and of course Albus)

What a lovely April Fool's!

Please consider writing some more for us - Please with big sad puppy dog eyes!

So nice to read a new fick from you! I've always enjoyed reading your stories. - Though I must say, Snape acting openly nice is a bit weird. Some further explanation in a new story maybe?