Wow! The story turned out amazingly, its so nice that while IshiHime still remained oblivious to the fact that they're absolutely perfect for each other-- Chizuru's POV gave me a thrill. Absolutely wonderful story. Great job!

Very cute. Always fun to see romantic stories from the POV of a 3rd character. Loved Chizuru's thoughts and observations; very true to her personality. Keep up the good work!

Chizuru's being too butty here. You know, when she looks at things she shouldn't look or hears some things she shouldn't here, that's butty.

45 / 50

Chizuru jealousy, ouch. Well anyway, as I said in my other reviews, I wubb the Ishihime. That speaks for itself