 TheTwilightRurouni 2008-11-29 . chapter 1That was different, and insightful. It really does beg the question, will Ichigo or Inoue ever catch on to the other? Who knows, but you write it well. Ha, I liked how you wrote Kagine, the gym teacher from hell. Brings an image of an old guy with a track suit on, and a whistle in his mouth. Anyway, I'm losing focus. It was a good one-shot, thanks for posting.
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 Alaena Night 2006-10-20 . chapter 1Hehe, so cute! So this is what teachers do... Nah, just kidding. This really is adorable. I like the distant sort of viewpoint you wrote it in, and I agree with the teachers' observations. Good work with this. |