Hahaha...poor Ed! Actually, I agree, I hate milk. *shudder* but him as a little kid is so cute!

aww!! i remember this! LOL.. its such an adorable and cute portrayal of lil ed.. XDD~ AWW!! XDD LOLOLOL.. XD

gives new meaning to the word hot.. lol XD

good job! =)

using college creative writing for fanfic is always cool.. =D

awesome job =)

lol lover of calcium snacks

Is number three Nina?? *wracks brain* I think it is...

No clue for number 2, haha.

You own at character-poem-writing. *nod* And this is total Ed/Win. Of course.

(I so would have had this review in faster if my computer hadn't frozen.)

WHOA.. see a quickie update! congratz! XDD .. soo cute.. another one which i heartz the last line.. XDD.. and i get two cookies.. woo! XDD.. technically cuz i was there when you wrote this.. XDD.. i like what u did with the who needs.. XDD .. cant wait to see everyone elses.. xDD

SO CUTE! i absolutely love the last line! XDD .. aww roy! XD .. squee! XDD .. this is amazing! XD .. isnt it kill two rabbits with one stone.. XDD .. for ushakova anyways.. LOL.. ANYWAYS.. this is awesomeness! XD

"Lover of his magical coat(1), Pyrotex-ignition gloves, and devoted First Lieutenant" Agreed...

"new meaning to the word “hot,”" Double-agreed...

"Who would like to see all female military personnel in miniskirts," ...Yup. That's about Roy in a nutshell. XD

XD This was great - I actually recalled some scenes from the manga where he was actually on the battlefield just from what you wrote. I love how easy it was to wash off all the incriminating evidence :P I'd murder a lot more if it was that easy ;D
But then you and Rachel would go nuts with the CSI stuff. That would be kinda funny XDD

cant believe my long comment went kerplunk! lol thats so not a word lol

i love the parallelism in here with the later ons and how it ties together the story so beautifully

this sounds like one of those rele good short stories that is in a lit textbook =D

GREAT JOB KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!

Well...at least AP Eng benefits you in *some* way.

You rabid fangirl.

I'm guessing that this was one of your higher grades in that class. XP

didn't read it yet... but anaphora!
ok... reading... :0D
whoa...dark... u get bored? lololol... its dark, but so amazing and real... :0D

very nice. direct, harsh, well-writen. (oh, big surprise there, huh? ^^)