  Lady KeyBlade
2006-07-13 . chapter 4 Queen Minnie! |
  TimeLeaper
2006-06-19 . chapter 4i am majorly confuzled... |
 Sonora-Margaret
2006-04-27 . chapter 4Chyea, that's nice. |
 Neassa
2006-04-26 . chapter 4Hi! I really liked this chap! Keep it up and update soon! |
old time reader
2006-04-17 . chapter 3 Kingdom hearts is the most wonderful thing this world has to offer |
Neassa
2006-04-10 . chapter 3Hi! Sorry I didn't review earlier. The internet has been weird. Anyways, awesome chap! Keep it up and UPDATE SOON! ^_^' |
Sonora-Margaret
2006-04-09 . chapter 3Oi Francis! I just got KH2 yesterday! I'm in agraba.(sp?) It's so great! And HA! I told you I'd get it! |
unkown120
2006-04-08 . chapter 3ok here's a reveiw. wow, lots of blushing in this chapter. namine thinks of him as a stalker, and i think she's right, and raine keeps saying stupid stuff to himself. then again it's true. anyway, don't stop now keep going! |
unkown120
2006-04-04 . chapter 2nice. Great ideas. as promised i reveiwed. anyway, i think you are doing very good at the action setting but keeping the romance setting in between everything else. it really makes this good. |
Neassa
2006-04-02 . chapter 2Wow, playing KH2 has totally boosted your updating. This was a great chap! Keep it up! |
Sonora-Margaret
2006-04-02 . chapter 2*waves* Hi! Another good chapter. I *will* get my hands on KH2! I WILL! |
unkown120
2006-04-01 . chapter 1wow. You said this was your first fic? this is great. expet a reveiw for each chapter from me, i often do, so i won't give up. Keep writing, this is good and is a good concept. |
Neassa
2006-04-01 . chapter 1Hi! I'm not good with detail, but I think this is an awesome start! I like the way you let Namine know who Raine was. And I really wanna know why Raine is in Castle Oblivion. I also like the way you had a bit of humor thrown in there, that was good. I think it would be a great idea to make this ino a full-fledged story. Keep up the good work!
P.S: Oh, and I cleaned my room and started playing KH2. IT TOTALLY ROCKS! |
Sonora-Margaret
2006-04-01 . chapter 1I thought that Raine sounded a bit stalker-ish, but in a cute way. Itsy-bitsy obsessive. I liked how he contradicted himself alot, and I find it interesting that Namine knows who he is. I think it's cool that there's been someone surviving under the floorboards at castle oblivion, and I want to know what you ment by Axel not blowing his cover. I liked the discription of Raine's clothing. Its a very good start, my friend. Also, I'm glad you liked the last chapter! ^.^ |
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