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| Xie Xie 2006-05-19 ch 2, | abuseThat was great lol I couldn't stop laughing! and you added people in so they could talk! YAY!! |
| Trekiael 2006-04-01 ch 1, | abuseIt was funny! No pairing and no hint at one so it can stay a popular thing and not anger any of your reader. Sasuke is so vain! Hahaha! I hope you'll keep doing in this line: funny, no pairing, just simple and interesting for any character you might write about. Good luck! Ja ne! |
| Xie Xie 2006-04-01 ch 1, | abuseTHe beginning was funny but later on in the story it asn't as funny, add people in and make them talk say funny things, then it'll be even more funny! :-D Anways it was good keep it up! I look foreward to the next chapter! |