love it how you switched it around!
so romantic

I really like your story; I always wondered myself what could have happened if it was Michaela and not Brian seeing Catherine and Sully together. I think your interpretation works very well! You kept them both very much in character, I could really picture them in that scene.

I loved these following lines, they're beautifully written:

"I love her. She is my heart."

"How could you not, Sully?" He took a deep breath.

"'Cause all the time she's been here…I was lookin' at you…thinkin' of you."

"I promise ya, Michaela," he began, "you're the one that's got my heart, and that's the way I want it to stay." She nodded.

"And you have mine." They kissed again, each feeling the pain receding from their hearts.

"What now?" he wondered, as he held her close. She wrapped her arms around him and rested her head against his beating heart.

"Just hold me, Sully. Hold me and never let go."

I guess this won't be the last story of yours that I read, I just found out that there are plenty of other Dr. Quinn stories from you waiting to be read by me. :-)

(Sorry if there are any mistakes in the language, I'm German.)

I really enjoyed this story it is really good D

This is such a tenderly written story. Just as BrittanyLS said... I would have much preferred your version of the episode!

this is a great story ur a fantastic writer!

You're such a beautiful writer! I love all of your stories, especially this one. You practically had me in tears for a moment there! I wish they had hired you to write the scripts for the series!

Please keep up the excellent work!

Luv April

This is how I would have loved that episode to go. Anything instead of Michaela being angry at Sully!