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| andbingowashisnamo 2007-10-17 ch 21,  | abuseare you planning on continuing this? *hopeful smile* it's a great story! |
| Wrinkled Fabric 2007-07-29 ch 21, | abuseI really want more! Is there going to be more? I love this! Fauve is such an excellent OC, she's too funny - especaily since she's scaring Jack Bauer. Please say we'll be getting an update? x |
| sparkygirl82 2007-02-09 ch 21, | abuseLoved the story so far. Any chance of an update? Maybe see how this finishes out? I really hope you do. Totally completely love it! |
| Tony24Michelle 2006-10-27 ch 21, | abuseGreat story! A little out there and not quite realistic but we all need a little imagination in our lives. I am looking forward to finding out what happens next so post soon. Keep up the good work!! |
| happyhooligan2001 2006-09-08 ch 21, | abuseGlad to see your story back. I'm sure Jack would enjoy home cooking since his time on the run. Fauve's mom is a delight. |
| BadHatHarry 2006-09-08 ch 21, | abuseStill love this story. It always manages to make me laugh. Hope for an update soon! |
| laura sedai 2006-07-07 ch 20, | abusethis is an amazingly funny story! i love it! you can thank happyhooligan for me reading and reviewing this, i read her stories and wanted to read more about fauve. |
| Muskoka Girl 2006-07-02 ch 20, | abuseWow! I'm really enjoying this story, it's a laugh a mile a minute. Too bad I only discovered it today. Poor Jack being pegged as "Jackie". Hmm...I like how TC said "Or I will shoot you". It's something we normally hear comming out of Jack's mouth. Keep up the great work! P.S: Isn't it great that just after this last season there has been a real outbreak in Jack/CHloe fics? |
| graga srrs 2006-06-16 ch 19, anon. | abuseI absolutely adore this! Update soon! :) |
| deadlymistress24 2006-06-08 ch 19, | abusegreat story! ive been reading it since the beginning and i've loved it. i love how jack is finding out all these interesting little facts about chloe's personal life. i have a suggestion for the next chapter, what if tripp, tc, and fauve decide to play with jack's head by making them think that tommy is like this really cute guy that chloe loves, and jack ends up realising its just a kid, and sees how loving chloe is with tommy, which makes jack's feelings for chloe even more noticable. lol...just a random idea i had, hope u like it. if u dont use is, its all good, im sure ur idea will fit in much better. toodlez :) |
| tigster5 2006-06-07 ch 19, | abuseCool! I loved the chapter. Please update soon!:) |
| BadHatHarry 2006-05-22 ch 17, | abuseLOved the chapter. Do we get to see the car ride next chapter?UPDATE! |
| Gavrilo-Princip 2006-05-21 ch 17, | abuseI like the concept, and I like Jack and Chloe. However, I hate Fauve. Any female who addresses another female as "sweetie" or "honey" almost constantly can always get on my nerves, but that's not even my main issue. She isn't scary. If I was in the same situation, and some girl acted like this, I'd leave the situation. She's not scary, she's not tough. Jack has tortured people. Jack carries a gun. Jack doesn't really care who he has to kill. A woman who has an attitude shouldn't phase him and I just find the whole character to be an unnecessary, annoying, stuck up, arrogant ** whom I wouldn't hesitate to pistol whip severely. But I seriously like the story and I believe you should write longer chapters. With more jack and chloe. And less Fauve |
| mari 2006-05-18 ch 16, anon. | abuseLove ! :) |
| BadHatHarry 2006-05-17 ch 16, | abuseLove this story! "No," Chloe said slowly, enunciating, "mine. Don't touch." |