My goodness, this just might be one of the best Kingdom Heart AU Stories I have read...and that's a lot. I have to say, I came across this via a comment on youtube and started reading it at whim, but this really caught my attention. I even sent it to a friend who loved it! Please keep up the good work! This is really unique and well written.

Please update.

~WizKid94

I haven't been here in a while, so you could imagine my excitement when I saw the new chapter. :)

I love it! The plot's finally rolling, even though the whole crime solving part kinda fell to the wayside. Sora's so transparent, it's obvious that when he was talking about being different he meant gender so, in his perspective, he could be with Kairi. *laughs*

Awesome chapter! Wow, sorry it took so long for me to get to this. I forgot it'd been updated, haha. I also had to reread the entire thing because I totally forgot what had happened so far. xD

Anyway, this chapter was great. What's this about Kairi's life being in danger? O: Can't wait to read more! And maybe I'll draw one of the scenes...we'll see. (:

gosh you HAVE to finish this whole thing! you made me laugh in nice heart warming way (not the sides hurting way, thank goodness!) yes i haven't laughed like that in a while! Especialy about the "Donkey!" joke! you are hilarious! i wish i was as funny as you!

Oh. Such ominous fortunes. It's be interesting if Tidus' fortune became literally true. I wonder what kind of Sin will appear...

Oh yeah, I was just wondering. What if you run out of Alphabet titles? Will you end it at that? Or extend it by using letters?
Oh well, that's a long way to go.

loving this story!
hope a new chapter comes out soon!

OMG i started cracking up with the alchohol part with Sora and Riku XD i, personally, dont like the hall of mirrors becuz i am directionally impaired just like kairi...well maybe more than kairi but still i get lost in more ways then one lol which makes me wonder why she chose it...

Well my sis says that she thinks Sora is bi, but i told her pshh maybe he keeps forgetting kairi's a boy...plz dont make sora gay LOL that would be a shock for girl Kairi.

Last night i kept thinking bout ur story and like would sora be angry if he found out and HOW would he find out. i really wanna noe who sora likes but im guessing its kairi but shes a guy sorta...so that wouldnt work *cough* or would it? i really dont want the guys to be mad at kairi becuz she lied about her gender but then again im not the writer. *hint hint* LOL

for the person who killed wakka im hoping its not tidus and sora cuz they're too funny to be murderers. wow im serious ur sense of humor has got me laughing at every chap. even my sis who doesnt like fanfic loves ur story ;] ME TO i cant wait for the next chappie but take ur time cuz i want teh next suspense filling chapter to be filled with awesomnes. till next time :D

wow great story! I just read it so I'm probably one of the last to review.

Anyway, I also read your story Rules of Cosplay and I really liked it! Plz continue, they have me laughing all the time!

Omg ... that chapter was so awesome xD! Can't wait for update :3

"GO ORGS!"
I totally cracked up when I read that, it was the most awesome cheer I've heard in a while.
This story's great, the way you write it just sucks me in.
Keep writing it!!

I just read your story all over from the beginning, and you're an amazing writer! Not only the plot is so funny, but the twist of events and the characters are really good.

Favorite definitely. :)
Oh and update soon!

Alright, review time! :)

Well, IFRIGGINGLOVETHISSTORY. The plot line is amazing, you portray all the characters PERFECTLY, your writing style is awesome, you don't repeat yourself unless it's being used as a technique. I love all the titles, too. :D Think you'll get all the way to Z? :3

Just about everything is flawless. The ONLY negative thing I saw were a few spelling/grammar errors. But you know what? If that's the only bad thing, then you're doing just wonderfully. Especially since even those are uncommon.

Over all, I really hope you don't lose interest in this story, because you're an amazing writer, and I NEED to continue reading this. :D

OH. MY. GOD. the ending is totally suspenseful! is this story going to have, like, action and fighting in it? because the fortune telling kinda sounds like Kairi's going to stop pursuing Sora, and that something 'sinful' is going to happen with Tidus? i kinda didn't get tha Tidus one and Kairi one, but Sora's and Riku's furtune sounds very accurate. anyway, what i was trying to say was...this stroy is AWESOME!! Please update as soon as you can!! Please?! :)

OMG! AWESOME!

The ending with the Fortune Teller somewhat confirms my thought of Sora killing Wakka! OMG! Yes, my theory was low at first, but after reading that, it raised up like 50%!

Keep up the good work. Can't wait to read the next chapter ;D


- Girl who is obsessed with Sora AKA xRandomxLullabyx

omg.
your story is freaking amazing!!
I would marry it if I could!!
I speak for 2!
the truth is, I hated sora before because he was too dang freaking HAPPY. now, I admire his gayness.
will Roxas and Namine hook up?
I'll die if they don't!
(sorry. I'm a major Roxine fan. MAJOR.)
PLEASE CONTINUE WRITING AND UPDATE SOONER!!