I really like this story. It is getting interesting. Cant wait for next chapter :)

Ahh, it's really good to see Essa behaving normally and not so angsty. It's nice to see that she can interact like a normal teenager with friends, and really gives her character a whole new opening that hadn't been there before. I can see her a lot more realistically than before! This was a really fun chapter to read, especially the beginning with Serena and Rini. ^^

Eep! Long time no see! :D And here I am reviewing a chapter! I see that there are a lot of them that I missed and I think I read one out of order, lol...


Anyway, I'm really really loving Rini in this fic. I absolutely adore her and it's fun to read, seeing her so much like her mother and not annoying and really important.

Hm. Perhaps Essa-chan hasn't gotten away that easily after all. *giggles.* Well, perhaps I should keep my hunches to themselves until later ne?

Krim: We'd all be better off for it.

*glare* Shut up. Anyways. *sinister music begins to play in the background.* I wonder...what exactly does Mystery Bishie know?



Remember to smile cuz' Jesus loves ya!~

Haha, I was actually very worried in the first scene that it might actually be real! I was like "onoez what will serena do now?" But when Star started acting all sneery and evil I had a feeling that it was just a dream.

Good job on that, by the way! I was a little worried that something really bad was going to happen... xD Anyway, I love the relationship between Essa and Spike! It's so cute. And with Darien and Serena. It reminds me of my relationship. *sigh* I'm such a sucker for this romantic stuff... ^^

Is this the end? No it can't be! Sailor Scouts can NEVER relax, lol. There's always something being a bother... I wonder what the real deal is. Overall, this was a really good chapter. It's nice to see that Rini and Spike are okay, and perhaps we'll see a bonding moment between Rini and Lita, or a cute sweet moment between Serena and Darien!

And I do wonder if there is a love interest for poor Essa... *ponders* Hehehe... though I'm guessing she wouldn't take too well to that. Oh well, either way, I can't wait to read more! I can finally catch my breath, which is nice, and I like the gentle way the chapter ended. ^^ Yee!

Oh no! Not Rini and Spike! I hope they're okay! I was hoping that they'd be coming to the rescue, lol. xD Well I just guess that means that I'll have to read the next chapter.

And perhaps our actual cats are related, 'cause Rufus is based off of my kitty. That'd be kind of weird. Hehe. But this was a good chapter. Must make time for the next one! I'm almost caught up!

YAY!!RINI AND SPIKE ARE OKAY!^_^
*does happy dance*
HORAAY!!HORAAY!!

*pause*
wait a sec...that dragon couldn't have been taken out that easily..*eyes you suspiciously*

i'm with rei...theress something not right about it...
but utill then..O.o;
*breaks into song and dances*

CELEBRATE GOOD TIMES C'MON!^^
WOT!
UPDATE SOON!*give puppy dog eyes*

Good chapter, though I have a few complaints. It looked as though there should be some sort of scene-breaker between your first two scenes, the one where Serena is in disguise, and the one where they used the teleport to get into the darknesy place. It's not that big of a deal, but if you were aiming for perfection, it's something that could be added. But hey, your story is brilliant without it. ^^

The second one is a simple but kinda funny spelling error in the very end of the chapter. Instead of Tuxedo Mask, it was Tuxedo MAX who was restraining Sailor Moon. xD I giggled. Anyway, good chapter. :D I enjoyed reading it.

Ooh, a plan! Hurrah! It's interesting to see how Essa interacts with the canon characters. I like how you put that together. I can't point out exactly why 'cause I'm not sure what it is specifically, but I like it. And I hope Rei gets punched in the face eventually, lol.

But poor Rini. She's one of my favorite characters in the Sailormoon universe... I hope her and Spike manage well. Spike has grown on me quite a lot. Who knows, maybe him and Rufus are long lost brothers? lol. Your feline seems much more intelligent, though. xD

Anyway, I hope to read another chapter soon. :3 I'm almost caught up with you! Yay!

*GASPETH* Oh poor Rini. I really liked her in this chapter, too! :( And Rei's such a meanie-poo-poo-head. She needs to get laid or something, I think. I always hated her, and I thank you for making her sound like a royal pain in this chapter. It makes me feel better about how much I dislike her, lol.

Oh finally Essa is going to fight! Yay! I can't wait till I get around to reading the next chapter! xD It's about time we see what she can do! *is excited* I've been waiting for this since I started reading, but I'm glad that instead of rushing into her transformation and senshi-ness, you took the time to reveal her actual personality and stuff. :3 I like that.

O.o;

NOO!RINI AND SPIKE!
please tell me they're not dead...*sobs*

PLEASE UPDATE!!I HAVE TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!*begs*

I like how things are unfolding, and how I finally know a little bit of the backstory. But not too much! That's good. Good pace. Backstory information could've been introduced sooner, but it's better a little later than overwhelming the reader in the very beginning.

Nice chapter! I'm curious as to what's next. I must go read the other chapters! ^o^

I really, really like this chapter. I adore Rini so of course it's nice to see her in a positive light, but the relationship between her and Serena is great, especially near the end when Rini is concerned. It's so sweet and I'm a total sucker for that stuff! But you did a great job at portraying the mood and what effect the evil looming cloud is having on poor Serena. I can't wait to read about what happens! I feel like I'm having a field day with your story. xD