I think you gave Ronon more dialogue in this chapter than he has in a normal Season of SGA! Still, good story, great writing, and still a shame that there's only 5 seasons of one of the best shows ever.

Wonderful story. I was wondering how you were going to get Sheppard out of that one :P

Lurved this story. The Sheppard/Rodney bickering. The Sheppard/Rodney angst. =D It was yummy and the characters were perfectly portrayed I think. And I like how you incorporated Teyla and Ronon's...umm...ackwardnessy trusty type issues into it. Hmm.. You know what I mean. (hopefully)

There are many parts that I really loved about this story. The whole Rodney 'death' scene was nice. =3 Sheppard's look at Teyla at the crater when she first told him of her plan. Rodney with Amma. (I just loved the way you write Rodney with children, so bloody perfect.) And of course Rodney saving Sheppard's life and them waiting in the tunnel. Absolutely fawned over Rodney throwing Sheppard's line back at him before healing him. And Sheppard and Rodney waiting in the tunnel. Yeah, I just had to mention that one again.

I haven't noticed a sequel to this one in your other story listings, and I know it's been quite a while since this was originally written, but I would like to just say that if you were ever to write one I would be very happy indeed. It's interesting to me what fallout might happen over these instances and I am insanely curious about what has happened to Sasha, Karmath & Amma and whether or not they're still throwing people in the "incinerator"...

Thank you so much for this story. It's not often that there is believable plot and characters and to top that off with the fact that this piece made me laugh out loud, this was excellent. Please continue with the good work!

Thank God, your work is never done, or where would we fan fic readers be? This was a wonderful tale. Well told and with just the right amount of suspense to keep me hitting the ente button. Thanks for it.

Excellent story, had me perching on the edge of my seat till the end. I liked it very much.

Thanks for a great read! I loved the whumping/angst throughout the fic. Nice job on the characters.

Awe, lovely story. I love fan fictions about the recovery after the fallout of Doranda. They're always great McKay fics.

Oh the angst! I have to hope there's a miracle just round the corner...

POOR TEYLA, SHE MUST BE BESIDE HERSELF WITH GUILT.

Talk about the tension mounting- it's gone into the stratosphere!

Well the plot thickens, but there is light at the end of this extraordinary well-written piece!

I'm absolutely biting at the bit now!

Just realised I'd been in such a hurry to get to Chapter 2 that I failed to review chapter 1 so this will have to cover Ch. 1 and 2.

This is a really great story and the obvious conflict between Rodney and John is creating lots of questions in my head. I'm not totally and utterly hooked as to what Teyla has thought up. I just know it is going to be so good and that is an understatement.

Absolutely stellar!! Couldn't stop reading to review as I went--but there were moments of sheer brilliance throughout! Thanks so much! ^^